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an endless depth of indulgence.
Warm
moist
breath
on bronzed flesh
of delicacy
such unfathomable
tenderness
when
skin
connects
to
skin
a certain
heat
that emanates
of an
unmistakable
To be... to be....
Ohh,
to
be
so fucking
intoxicated
By this,
our passion
It builds
with each quiver
with each
and every
thought
—hundreds upon hundreds
My lips,
physically ache
in sense memory
my body cries out
for your touch
my will dissolves
into desperate
wanton desire
for you
for your lips
on me.
thousands
upon
thousands
and
a thousand
times
more.
.....
Author's Note
Thanks to my poet muse for such incredible energy, allowing inspiration to actually become written word. .... 🌹
©Blu2021
pic via Pinterest
painting titled "Thousand kisses deep"
by Jaanika Talts
©Blu2021
pic via Pinterest
painting titled "Thousand kisses deep"
by Jaanika Talts
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Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 2:23am
i enjoy reading your work.
the ideas, how they move.
wanting to read more and more,
line after line...
hoping that they never end.
thank you for sharing
the ideas, how they move.
wanting to read more and more,
line after line...
hoping that they never end.
thank you for sharing
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Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
I appreciate the read and your lovely comments.
Thank you for visiting, ms
It's so nice to see your thoughts on my page... it makes me smile, so. ☺
🌹
xo
B
Thank you for visiting, ms
It's so nice to see your thoughts on my page... it makes me smile, so. ☺
🌹
xo
B
Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
Anonymous
5th May 2021 2:34am
Whew...is it hot in here or is just me? 😉 Nice spill. 🙂
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Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 3:05am
Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 3:43am
Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 3:45am
Thx, Leo
I appreciate it
🌹
xo
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I appreciate it
🌹
xo
check out this link... it's cute...
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Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 4:05am
You remind me of someone I really loved once with your words Blue. Passion of a poetess, her favorite color was sapphire blue, birthstone. I like this.
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Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 1:38pm
That's an amazing compliment, Remy I truly appreciate your thoughtful and kind words. I am so happy that I remind you of past good memories. I'm grateful for the generous list add and all the support.
🌹-💙
xo
-B
🌹-💙
xo
-B
Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 4:21am
You are touching me all over with these sexy words, LOL. Great poem. Keep on writing you strong beautiful sexy women.
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Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 1:59pm
lol... I am so glad you enjoyed reading and I thank you for sharing your thoughts, Francisco!
🌹
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Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 2:04pm
Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 5:00am
Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 2:06pm
Mmmm... I am glad those lines spoke to you, Lj.
I thank you for reading and taking the time with me.... leaving your thoughts and remarks.
I'm grateful for you
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
I thank you for reading and taking the time with me.... leaving your thoughts and remarks.
I'm grateful for you
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 2:56pm
Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
Ohh my... thank you, dear poetess 🙏🏻
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts with me. I'm all smiles that I was able to thrill. ;)
It's nice meeting you and I hope you are enjoying your time here on DU.
You're always welcome on my page ✨
🌹-💙
B
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts with me. I'm all smiles that I was able to thrill. ;)
It's nice meeting you and I hope you are enjoying your time here on DU.
You're always welcome on my page ✨
🌹-💙
B
Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 5:27am
A thousands thoughts of lips. Kisses .skin on skin .sharing breaths and heat in a beautiful connection
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Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 2:02pm
Ohh how the thoughts do flutter through the mind!!.. lol ... I really appreciate your lovely comments, C. I can't thank you enough for taking the time and for stopping by.
Much love, my best DU friend!
🌹
xo
-S
Much love, my best DU friend!
🌹
xo
-S
Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 10:34am
Oh I so need to be a muse, that was absolutely beautiful, a beautiful write from a beautiful poetess
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
Awww... (blushes)
I thank so much, Ron I appreciate the list add and your thoughtful remarks
All my warmest regards, dear poet
🌹⚔️💙
xoxo
I thank so much, Ron I appreciate the list add and your thoughtful remarks
All my warmest regards, dear poet
🌹⚔️💙
xoxo
Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 1:56pm
WOW and double WOW. One of your best poems...you allowed me to join and experience an amazing UP. Thanks my Princess and lady with magic words. Hugs and peace, oral
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Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
5th May 2021 1:58pm
Quite a compliment, indeed my dear Oralizer.
I thank you so very much 🙏🏻
🌹
xo
B
I thank you so very much 🙏🏻
🌹
xo
B
Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
6th May 2021 6:06am
Golden path to heaven put into words that leave a trail deep within after reading. There is smoke and fire here that leaves a indelible imprint on my body and soul when I follow the path of your words into the heart of heaven.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
7th May 2021 2:14am
Ohhhh my... yes, indeed - into the heart of heaven, exactly! I loved your summation, John. It's just so gorgeously vibrant and sultry. I appreciate you so much and thank you for sharing your delicious thoughts as well as the generous list add.
I am so grateful, my friend 🙏🏻
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
I am so grateful, my friend 🙏🏻
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
Mornin snuggles to you, beautiful B! Your cascade hits Just Right in tender ache and then sum.. You had me at the gate with ur opening stanza--
"Warm
moist
breath
on bronzed flesh
of delicacy
such unfathomable
tenderness
when
skin
connects
to
skin"
~~Lovely all over, that!
Much enjoyed ur art here as well.. also had me hearing a smokey fav song as I read.. Leonard Cohen, A Thousand Kisses Deep..
have a lovely day, sweet friend,
~d
"Warm
moist
breath
on bronzed flesh
of delicacy
such unfathomable
tenderness
when
skin
connects
to
skin"
~~Lovely all over, that!
Much enjoyed ur art here as well.. also had me hearing a smokey fav song as I read.. Leonard Cohen, A Thousand Kisses Deep..
have a lovely day, sweet friend,
~d
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Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
Mighty good morning, my dear, d 🙇♀️
It's that tender ache I want to be of one with!! You know I do!!! ;) I am all smiles reading your yummy comments and I indulge in said smiles a little bit more than I should (hey, a tiny bit of gluttony is ok between friends!) as I drink my perfect cup of coffee... how divine. Perfect comments AND perfect coffee..how lucky am I !!???.. Very much, I'd say.
Thank you for such thoughtfulness. I adored what you said in your feedback and am grateful for you taking the time to pick out your line choices.... that kinda gets me in the feels... all my appreciation, there.
The pic was a fluke find on Pinterest, but I felt its draw...
as far as Cohen... ohh hell Yessss!!
https://youtu.be/netfyjdNBrU
I hope your day finds you well dear poetess
Always such a pleasure to see you 🦋
xoxo
🌹 - 💙
-B
It's that tender ache I want to be of one with!! You know I do!!! ;) I am all smiles reading your yummy comments and I indulge in said smiles a little bit more than I should (hey, a tiny bit of gluttony is ok between friends!) as I drink my perfect cup of coffee... how divine. Perfect comments AND perfect coffee..how lucky am I !!???.. Very much, I'd say.
Thank you for such thoughtfulness. I adored what you said in your feedback and am grateful for you taking the time to pick out your line choices.... that kinda gets me in the feels... all my appreciation, there.
The pic was a fluke find on Pinterest, but I felt its draw...
as far as Cohen... ohh hell Yessss!!
https://youtu.be/netfyjdNBrU
I hope your day finds you well dear poetess
Always such a pleasure to see you 🦋
xoxo
🌹 - 💙
-B
Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
6th May 2021 6:41pm
Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
7th May 2021 3:38am
Oh my, Lady Blue
I am flush with tingles and desire after reading this super sensual, romantic piece. This passage is so very delicious in it's passionate suggestion,
"such unfathomable
tenderness
when
skin
connects
to
skin "
And the way you paint your desire is breathtaking in these passage,
"My lips,
physically ache
in sense memory
my body cries out
for your touch
my will dissolves
into desperate
wanton desire
for you
for your lips
on me."
Bravissima, gorgeous Goddess BB🐻💞🐰
I am flush with tingles and desire after reading this super sensual, romantic piece. This passage is so very delicious in it's passionate suggestion,
"such unfathomable
tenderness
when
skin
connects
to
skin "
And the way you paint your desire is breathtaking in these passage,
"My lips,
physically ache
in sense memory
my body cries out
for your touch
my will dissolves
into desperate
wanton desire
for you
for your lips
on me."
Bravissima, gorgeous Goddess BB🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
8th May 2021 7:06am
Your comments leave me in flat out awe....
I am 😶 speechless, dear BB.
I appreciate all your loveliness, dear poet. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for all the wonderful sweet and kind words. Your tingling is smile making and a bit of proof that I can somewhat 'bring it' without getting straight out uber graphical.....lol
Much love,
🌹
xo
B
I am 😶 speechless, dear BB.
I appreciate all your loveliness, dear poet. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for all the wonderful sweet and kind words. Your tingling is smile making and a bit of proof that I can somewhat 'bring it' without getting straight out uber graphical.....lol
Much love,
🌹
xo
B
Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
10th May 2021 6:35am
YOU HAVE ME.
UNTIL EVERY LAST STAR
IN THE GALAXY DIES.
YOUR ONE AND ONLY MUSE
BLUEVELVETE 🌹😍THE TRUTH
UNTIL EVERY LAST STAR
IN THE GALAXY DIES.
YOUR ONE AND ONLY MUSE
BLUEVELVETE 🌹😍THE TRUTH
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Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
10th May 2021 6:40am
Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
15th May 2021 00:53am
Wow..I am in love with your words 😍
It's been a long time since a a woman's words captivated me like yours 💕
It's been a long time since a a woman's words captivated me like yours 💕
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Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
15th May 2021 00:59am
Ohhh my!
That's extremely kind William. I humbly thank you for sharing such lovely sentiments and adding me to your RL. I am all smiles that you found some resonance within my little offering.
Much appreciated, my new friend 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
x-B
That's extremely kind William. I humbly thank you for sharing such lovely sentiments and adding me to your RL. I am all smiles that you found some resonance within my little offering.
Much appreciated, my new friend 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
x-B
Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
15th May 2021 1:03am
Her Words
When I read
Her words,
I’m no longer
Numb.
A million
Fucking miles
Away, she still
Puts a smile
On my face.
She talks dirty
Better than
Any other
Girl I know,
All the while
Writing these
Love poems
That make me
Believe it could
Be true.
Mystery is a
Motherfucker
For a dreamer
Like me and
Her’s is the
Best I know.
She is like a
Star in the night
Seen through a
Smoke screen--
Fire through
Rose colored
Glasses.
She is
Pure beauty,
Broken, only
Perfectly.
Words are beauty to me 😍
Hence my respect for your talent.
I wrote that for another du member
Because her words alone captivated me.
When I read
Her words,
I’m no longer
Numb.
A million
Fucking miles
Away, she still
Puts a smile
On my face.
She talks dirty
Better than
Any other
Girl I know,
All the while
Writing these
Love poems
That make me
Believe it could
Be true.
Mystery is a
Motherfucker
For a dreamer
Like me and
Her’s is the
Best I know.
She is like a
Star in the night
Seen through a
Smoke screen--
Fire through
Rose colored
Glasses.
She is
Pure beauty,
Broken, only
Perfectly.
Words are beauty to me 😍
Hence my respect for your talent.
I wrote that for another du member
Because her words alone captivated me.
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Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
15th May 2021 1:07am
Beatific!!!
Your talent and love of words shines bright 🔆
I adored this.
Ty for sharing, William
🌹
Your talent and love of words shines bright 🔆
I adored this.
Ty for sharing, William
🌹
Re: Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
15th May 2021 1:10am
You are welcome! I thought you of all people would enjoy plus I wanted you to see that there is more to me than dark poetry😜
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Re. an endless depth of indulgence.
3rd Jul 2021 7:55pm
That opening stanza not only was sensual but it also felt spiritual, connecting in such an eloquent manner.
I also like how you increase the intensity from "hundreds" to "thousands", that was pretty brilliant.
Outstanding work Blue.
I also like how you increase the intensity from "hundreds" to "thousands", that was pretty brilliant.
Outstanding work Blue.
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