deepundergroundpoetry.com
Always late to work, to spew nonsense
At the start of the race
The full moon pulls
Maximizing intent
Never the same as always
You're making it through
Old and content
Spending the extra minutes in
appreciation of the forever moving water
It doesn't happen everyday
Silliness of mankind's most common
Feelings
Always hiding in the cold
Thorn and all
Misunderstanding and being able
The hard work
The release
On the final night run
The casual routine
Breaking apart from something usual
Seeing the sunrise
A little different
Each morning
No telling of yes and no
Ultimately making an
Ultimatum immature
Is simplicity suppose to be so?
I didn't want to be the one to forget
How it really feels to drown in the excitement
Twist and turns
Tend to be
The nostalgic complications
That forever make it bliss
Rambling on for the sake of confusion's
Explanation
Never finding definitions
The thoughts are fine
The full moon pulls
Maximizing intent
Never the same as always
You're making it through
Old and content
Spending the extra minutes in
appreciation of the forever moving water
It doesn't happen everyday
Silliness of mankind's most common
Feelings
Always hiding in the cold
Thorn and all
Misunderstanding and being able
The hard work
The release
On the final night run
The casual routine
Breaking apart from something usual
Seeing the sunrise
A little different
Each morning
No telling of yes and no
Ultimately making an
Ultimatum immature
Is simplicity suppose to be so?
I didn't want to be the one to forget
How it really feels to drown in the excitement
Twist and turns
Tend to be
The nostalgic complications
That forever make it bliss
Rambling on for the sake of confusion's
Explanation
Never finding definitions
The thoughts are fine
Published 29th Apr 2021
| Edited 26th Jul 2021
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 3
reading list entries 0
comments 2
reads 348
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
6th May 2021 1:13pm
'Life, eh.' --you hv penned ur thoughts well.. we all tend to Forget sometimes but if i have learned a thing- it is that we must Make n Take time for Self.. outside the mundane...
and this ...
"Twist and turns
Tend to be
The nostalgic complications
That forever make it bliss"
~So right on!
have a full moon dance and rejuvenate, sweet poet. much enjoyed ur ponderings ;)
~d
and this ...
"Twist and turns
Tend to be
The nostalgic complications
That forever make it bliss"
~So right on!
have a full moon dance and rejuvenate, sweet poet. much enjoyed ur ponderings ;)
~d
24th May 2021 2:25pm
I really like the last stanza and your style in general. Your voice is very noticeable. You are deep in a way that is inviting, not annoying, and I think that is cool.
