deepundergroundpoetry.com
Etched Inside The Soul
Old tears
are just dust
old bones
crack and rust
old mind
breaks into two
old heart
thinks only of you.
are just dust
old bones
crack and rust
old mind
breaks into two
old heart
thinks only of you.
Published 25th Apr 2021
Author's Note
My photo
of a painting i acquired by Michelle Flowers
of a painting i acquired by Michelle Flowers
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 9
reading list entries 6
comments 7
reads 888
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
26th Apr 2021 2:13am
Dear N,
Poignantly true. This poem captivated my mind such that I feel very lost and sad for a life I didn’t live. I love the photo to support the write. It’s a fabulous combination. H🌷
Poignantly true. This poem captivated my mind such that I feel very lost and sad for a life I didn’t live. I love the photo to support the write. It’s a fabulous combination. H🌷
26th Apr 2021 10:23am
The sense of longing and aging are palpable ... nice painting ... Bless and love ... .
26th Apr 2021 1:41pm
28th Apr 2021 12:51pm
29th Apr 2021 7:00am
Beautiful. I always enjoy your work. Short and bittersweet. Well written
12th May 2021 9:26pm
18th Jun 2021 5:11pm
