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Good Fucking Girl
Good fucking girl
Is what you say
When you message me wanting to play
Good fucking girl
is what you say
When I video myself in such an explicit way
Good fucking girl
is what you say
When you mould me like a bit of worthless clay
Good Fucking Girl
is what you say
When you tell me to spread my legs and lay
Good fucking girl
is what you say
Every. Single. Time. You throw me away
Good fucking girl
is what I say
When I give you no more of my time nor day
Is what you say
When you message me wanting to play
Good fucking girl
is what you say
When I video myself in such an explicit way
Good fucking girl
is what you say
When you mould me like a bit of worthless clay
Good Fucking Girl
is what you say
When you tell me to spread my legs and lay
Good fucking girl
is what you say
Every. Single. Time. You throw me away
Good fucking girl
is what I say
When I give you no more of my time nor day
Published 22nd Apr 2021
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19th Sep 2021 1:35pm
22nd Sep 2021 8:57pm
19th Sep 2021 1:44pm
A recount history shaped and penned in modern day. I love the white switch at the far end button. Good write!
22nd Sep 2021 8:58pm
22nd Sep 2021 12:42pm
22nd Sep 2021 8:59pm
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Oct 2021 11:45pm
23rd Sep 2021 9:02pm
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26th Sep 2021 7:55pm
25th Sep 2021 9:46pm
That's how it usually is until he gets lonely thinking about you and make that call missing what he had.
That Good Fucking Girl
That Good Fucking Girl
4th Oct 2021 7:11pm
nice the way you write and to the point no bars hold just boot his lazy ass out
6th Oct 2021 00:14am
All that dirty talk that can really feel good but is actually bad.
These things eventually reveal themselves.
When that which was hidden comes to light it's not a pretty sight.
These things eventually reveal themselves.
When that which was hidden comes to light it's not a pretty sight.
7th Oct 2021 11:19am
8th Oct 2021 11:28am
Dear, Mucky
I love the mechanics of this piece. The repeated phrase becomes more poignant with each reading until, at last, you claw back your power.
A wonderfully original piece. Brava!
I love the mechanics of this piece. The repeated phrase becomes more poignant with each reading until, at last, you claw back your power.
A wonderfully original piece. Brava!
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
14th Dec 2021 10:37pm
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1st Jan 2022 5:44pm
14th Jan 2022 5:10pm
An expression of submission and strength at the end. I love the end of your poem. You are sweet, loving and tough girl worth keeping it.
KS
KS
15th Jan 2022 9:32pm
5th Feb 2022 10:53pm
It's okay for good girl to be a little bit naughty for the person. Keep on writing.
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
18th Jul 2022 1:06pm
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3rd Feb 2023 9:46pm
24th Mar 2023 10:56am
Hoi hoi
Nice poem, but the end is the cherry on the cake!
Wonderful and strong.
Keep them coming please.
Kind regards, Gus
Nice poem, but the end is the cherry on the cake!
Wonderful and strong.
Keep them coming please.
Kind regards, Gus
19th May 2023 8:37pm
