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On The Horizon
The brightest light emerges out of the deepest depths of darkness
So hold on and be strong during your moments of weakness
Life will test our perseverance and we must answer the calls
Standing up tall throughout it all even when pouring rain falls
Pitfalls are inevitable but we can be charitable to each other
Providing shoulders to cry on as one to rely on when not asunder
Thunder will rumble and there'll be flashes of lighting
We just have to weather the storms and keep on fighting
Delighting and cherishing the heat rays of those sunny days
Don't go cray cray or just lay down; throwing your crown away
Stay upright cause after dark nights the Sun's on the horizon
Use your 5G and hear me clearly as if I was Verizon
So hold on and be strong during your moments of weakness
Life will test our perseverance and we must answer the calls
Standing up tall throughout it all even when pouring rain falls
Pitfalls are inevitable but we can be charitable to each other
Providing shoulders to cry on as one to rely on when not asunder
Thunder will rumble and there'll be flashes of lighting
We just have to weather the storms and keep on fighting
Delighting and cherishing the heat rays of those sunny days
Don't go cray cray or just lay down; throwing your crown away
Stay upright cause after dark nights the Sun's on the horizon
Use your 5G and hear me clearly as if I was Verizon
Published 19th Apr 2021
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20th Apr 2021 1:44am
There will be light after the dark
However, sometimes it makes more sense to hit the light switch in the kitchen instead of letting the roaches run rampant and spreading disease unchecked
Cuz while one waits on the sunrise, those vermin are livin it up off the food bought with the sweat of a man
Food that is prepurposed to feed his children
However, sometimes it makes more sense to hit the light switch in the kitchen instead of letting the roaches run rampant and spreading disease unchecked
Cuz while one waits on the sunrise, those vermin are livin it up off the food bought with the sweat of a man
Food that is prepurposed to feed his children
23rd Apr 2021 00:22am
LOL @ that final line! Bravo! This is the type of poetry that's feel-good to me. It's humorous and yet there's a very serious undercurrent here.
Don't go cray cray or just lay down; throwing your crown away
Stay upright
That ^ part reminds me of the biblical verse about remaining upright because the devil is a roaring lion circling, just waiting to pounce when you least suspect.
Enjoyed the energy of this offering.
Don't go cray cray or just lay down; throwing your crown away
Stay upright
That ^ part reminds me of the biblical verse about remaining upright because the devil is a roaring lion circling, just waiting to pounce when you least suspect.
Enjoyed the energy of this offering.
31st May 2021 6:52pm
It's a wonderful piece offering hope and resilience. You used humor to deliver a message with your unique style of rhyme and flow.
Outstanding verse sir.
Outstanding verse sir.
