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Dawn
She's
among
the
trees
said
soft
ly
sway,
day
- dream
- &
a
little
breeze,
with
all
day
long
in
mind.
Published 9th Apr 2021
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9th Apr 2021 3:56pm
Oh hell yes! Perfect spring poem and visual form to accompany. I felt the dreamy essence and musical melody of this, Pisha. Well done.
9th Apr 2021 4:10pm
Thank you. I was thinking about, Dan, and his style of writing and that small ar·rhyth·mic
rhythm & rhyme, ( such style that guy! 😆)
It was though he was playing his pipe with me the whole time.
rhythm & rhyme, ( such style that guy! 😆)
It was though he was playing his pipe with me the whole time.
9th Apr 2021 4:12pm
You know, I started to say that, but I wasn't sure I should, in case it would make you sad because it wasn't your intention.
You did good. And, I'm sure he is. xo
You did good. And, I'm sure he is. xo
