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sharks, vultures and hyenas
be on guard against those
who seek perfection--
for they feel the most flawed
watch out for those who criticize
everything--
for they feel they are always wrong
beware of those who talk of others
in secret--
because they are also talking about
you
be aware of those who give too much--
something great may be asked for in
return
stay away from those always taking
up causes--
they are not trying to save the world,
just themselves
keep your distance from those who
compliment everything--
sooner or later, everything you do
will be seen as wrong
sharks, vultures and hyenas--
the carrion of this world
sitting on platforms, blogs
and social media
mouths wet with anticipation
as the blood of misery rises
and the feeding frenzy
begins--
small gods that few
worship
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Re. sharks, vultures and hyenas
4th Apr 2021 11:30pm
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4th Apr 2021 11:35pm
Re. sharks, vultures and hyenas
5th Apr 2021 00:18am
My father always taught me to be careful who I allow on my ship because some may try to sink it. I've learned that the hard way; however, the anchor holds while the ship is battered; the anchor holds while the sails are torn. As long as we learn, Kitts. As long as we learn. xo
Sage advice.
Sage advice.
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5th Apr 2021 1:52am
Re. sharks, vultures and hyenas
5th Apr 2021 3:29am
Oh my, does this ring of a TOO familiar tune, (unfortunately.) What a enormously learned and wisely written piece bk. Thank you for the reminder to heed this advice, it really is valuable. IMO, These sharks, vultures and hyenas are masterful in manipulation and it's a honed skill to pick up on who's friend or foe, at times. I will remind myself to proceed with cautious optimism... and a keen eye!
So well penned, my friend 🙏
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So well penned, my friend 🙏
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Re: Re. sharks, vultures and hyenas
5th Apr 2021 10:32am
Seems I have struck a chord with this one.
Thank you for the kind words, Blue.
Thank you for the kind words, Blue.
Re. sharks, vultures and hyenas
virtual world unfortunately suits the so-cybercrime psycotic hypocrites so well.. I would say, it is an inevitable casualty if in such trapsters tricksters . as you title them spot on.. as veiled sheeps & saviours . the staggering irony! agrees to Ahavati.. life lessons learnt known experienced & explored & still unexplored, all are in the foundational elemental virtues of self of our core, that shines nurtures faces fights off these battles in real virtual or any dimensional now.. the flaming truthful Soul & the hearty anchoring Love .. are still & forevermore the quintessence & bonds we sync in .. that is agelessly the warrioring winning ultimate. time is just a notion in testing turns & twists tempering our swords & minds & painful ripen heart & eternal soul. awwe juz me in excess words.. excuse as ev.. your words inspire.. write on shine on in all light & love dear One :) xx
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Re. sharks, vultures and hyenas
5th Apr 2021 10:36am
Those damn life lessons. They do indeed pile up, especially the lessons on trust.
Thank you for the good words, uma.
Stay safe and shine on.
hugs and luv's
buddhakitty.
Thank you for the good words, uma.
Stay safe and shine on.
hugs and luv's
buddhakitty.
Re. sharks, vultures and hyenas
5th Apr 2021 8:41pm
Dear BK,
I feel as though you have just provided me a check list I can carry and refer to every time I find myself in trouble! I can’t begin to express how this write is a reality check to be reviewed before leaving the house every day. Outstanding. Simply outstanding.
H🌷
I feel as though you have just provided me a check list I can carry and refer to every time I find myself in trouble! I can’t begin to express how this write is a reality check to be reviewed before leaving the house every day. Outstanding. Simply outstanding.
H🌷
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Re: Re. sharks, vultures and hyenas
6th Apr 2021 1:09am
If nothing else, I live in the cold harsh light of reality.
Thank you for the kind words, Honoria.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you for the kind words, Honoria.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. sharks, vultures and hyenas
5th Apr 2021 8:56pm
Great. So true.
Particularly liked and agreed with:
"be aware of those who give too much--
something great may be asked for in
return"
Particularly liked and agreed with:
"be aware of those who give too much--
something great may be asked for in
return"
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Re: Re. sharks, vultures and hyenas
6th Apr 2021 1:11am
That is usually the "catch" to being given.
Thank you, Lozzamus.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, Lozzamus.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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7th Apr 2021 1:53am
Re. sharks, vultures and hyenas
14th Apr 2021 3:46am
Even self-righteousness can be a social pariah. Even when about the right cause, social, political, or others. Your poem pinpoints this truth perfectly.
John
John
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Re: Re. sharks, vultures and hyenas
14th Apr 2021 2:06pm
Thank you, John. Sincerity in what we practice can go a long way.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. sharks, vultures and hyenas
15th May 2021 5:31pm
BK, this is not only wise, but it's freakin' epic. Too much of one thing can't be good.
Outstanding work.
Outstanding work.
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17th May 2021 1:26am