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with this knowledge
memory is deep,
murky water filled
with blind cave fish
searching for bait
that has long since
rotted away
Published 2nd Apr 2021
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2nd Apr 2021 3:05am
It's hell getter older, indeed
You say so very much in little words, bk
I felt this one and will continue to, I know.
Thank you for sharing,
Warmest regards
🌹
xo
-B
You say so very much in little words, bk
I felt this one and will continue to, I know.
Thank you for sharing,
Warmest regards
🌹
xo
-B
2nd Apr 2021 5:39am
Dear BK,
Yes! Mush for brains and dust for bones. This is such a perfect write and yet for all the crumbling I wouldn’t want to be in my twenties again for anything. Insightful and wonderful poem. No one says it better than you. H🌷
Yes! Mush for brains and dust for bones. This is such a perfect write and yet for all the crumbling I wouldn’t want to be in my twenties again for anything. Insightful and wonderful poem. No one says it better than you. H🌷
2nd Apr 2021 12:20pm
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4th May 2021 2:43am
As I come closer to 50 I tend to start reflecting with a more profound understanding of myself, and yet with pieces like this I realize there is much more to explore.
Excellent work.
Excellent work.
6th May 2021 7:29pm
Explore away, wally. Let me know what you find out there.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
