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Bondage Battalion
Bondage Battalion
Viking Goth girl
Frizzy blonde feminine falsetto
Knee-length in black silk
Tattooed thigh-deep
As king’s dragon lady
Wears a gold lightning necklace
To lead a perfumed posse
A calyx phalanx
To beguile the virgins
The enemy emperor prefers
For his troops
Because of their sublimated libido
With ropes to entangle them
In a spidery web
Not a drop of blood split
By the bondage battalion
Viking Goth girl
Frizzy blonde feminine falsetto
Knee-length in black silk
Tattooed thigh-deep
As king’s dragon lady
Wears a gold lightning necklace
To lead a perfumed posse
A calyx phalanx
To beguile the virgins
The enemy emperor prefers
For his troops
Because of their sublimated libido
With ropes to entangle them
In a spidery web
Not a drop of blood split
By the bondage battalion
Published 31st Mar 2021
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31st Mar 2021 6:54pm
Oh ... I love the edginess of this ... so Soho ... wrong side of the tracks ...
Adore your impression of this piece my friend. Once more I have found my muse with a barista. The dress was hers and the story mine. Very overjoyed by what you saw in my words. Thank you so much for the RL. Means a lot to me, my friend.
XoXoXo
John
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John
31st Mar 2021 8:32pm
31st Mar 2021 8:33pm
you had me @ goth girl (ok, in all honesty I was hooked by the title but I didn't want to come across as THAT easy... lol!) My my, how I'm loving each and line, more and more.
I am picturing this battalion so vividly, that I would fall victim to their charms with not a peep of resistance!!! I fell under enchantment... hahaha. Your bdsm 'warriors' are sexy indeed!
Ty for sharing, John
I loooooved it
🌹
xo
Susan
I am picturing this battalion so vividly, that I would fall victim to their charms with not a peep of resistance!!! I fell under enchantment... hahaha. Your bdsm 'warriors' are sexy indeed!
Ty for sharing, John
I loooooved it
🌹
xo
Susan
Susan, I adore and treasure your commentary on this poem. Love how my title as the first line hooked you. And overjoyed to know you'd give in to my battalion without resistance. Yes, they are sexy and the barista who inspired their leader is a treasure of beauty herself. I am just tickled pink by your comment my friend. You have made me a very happy boy this afternoon.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
1st Apr 2021 4:47am
Viking goth girl. I used to play guild wars 2 and yeah, I thought of my Norn Engineer she was a hot piece of animation lol.
Love that my girl brought that to mind. Thank you for drawing your comparison. Made my evening. LOL
Xo
John
Xo
John
3rd Apr 2021 4:42pm
Lovely write GM, really enjoyed it. I love the first line, "Viking Goth Girl" - definitely set the sexy mood. And yes some Goth girls are blonde. ;) Really loved the imagery and word choices. It flows beautifully. Look forward to reading more.
3rd Apr 2021 4:50pm
Gracias KristinaX! Adore your impressions of this poem. Very glad that the first line set the mood for you. Overjoyed that my imagery flowed beautifully for you. This poem was inspired by a barista girl I encountered at a coffee shop. Thank you so much! ;-)
John
John
