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The High Priestess & Her Flock
“You can do it
I have faith in you”
She said
Touching her sweet lips
Her words echoed
In me
Over & over
Again
“You can do it
I have faith in you”
And her eyes were wide
And beautiful
She had prepared herself
For him
And them
And us
“You can do it
I have faith in you”
As she lay there
Gorgeous
And we knew
Just like she did
That we could do it
Just like she had said
I have faith in you”
She said
Touching her sweet lips
Her words echoed
In me
Over & over
Again
“You can do it
I have faith in you”
And her eyes were wide
And beautiful
She had prepared herself
For him
And them
And us
“You can do it
I have faith in you”
As she lay there
Gorgeous
And we knew
Just like she did
That we could do it
Just like she had said
Published 19th Mar 2021
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19th Mar 2021 2:56pm
I know that this was in the erotic category, but I found it to be extremely loving. The title image of the high priestess I think flows through this poem effortlessly, and really puts the woman in question on a pedestal. It was really tender, and I really appreciated that about this piece.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
Thank you for sharing.
-M
7th Apr 2021 3:39am
Thanks -M- for your detailed comments. So glad the love and tenderness came through. Erotica can have a beautiful sensitive side. Regards, S.
