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The Breakdown
Falling into the abyss the rocks felt like a million needles
Every one of them with a furious blast
Icicles tearing away at eyelids feeling fucking evil
Each one becoming worst than the last
But from there, there’s no way to go but up
Unless you dig Deep Underground
At the core you begin to understand the upheaval
All the while you slide into the breakdown
And then, when there is nothing left
All you can do is move forward
Published 19th Mar 2021
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19th Mar 2021 10:07am
22nd Mar 2021 11:38pm
Nothing like machine gun bass pedaling to get the juices flowing.
Thank you sir.
Thank you sir.
19th Mar 2021 11:31am
Damn, Walter... and dig deep you have.
A poignant introspective write... I felt you.
Good luck with the comp
🌹
xo
A poignant introspective write... I felt you.
Good luck with the comp
🌹
xo
23rd Mar 2021 2:48pm
Thank you Blue. Sometimes remembering where we came from and what we've been through helps push us forward.
19th Mar 2021 4:59pm
My father was a violent drug addict and alcoholic, he died a much younger man than I am today. My best friend died in 2017 from liver cirrhosis, due to his alcoholism, though his mind was addled for a decade before the end. It would be rare to find a life untouched by addiction. I hear you.
23rd Mar 2021 2:51pm
Daniel, I'm sorry for your loss. My father was the same way with his drinking, knowing he was sick he couldn't give it up until his last day. It's difficult to look back but sometimes it's necessary to know and understand where we come from.
