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Angel eyes
... ... ...
I moved away from the counter
I crossed the smoky, noisy bar
I whispered into a woman's ear ...
I complimented her on her angel eyes
She smiled... A pleasing precious smile
I turned away... as if I was fading away
And recalled nothing further from the evening...
What else can I say? ... What else can I invent ?
Maybe the moon hissed her loneliness to me ...
Searching for me more frantically
... ... ...
I moved away from the counter
I crossed the smoky, noisy bar
I whispered into a woman's ear ...
I complimented her on her angel eyes
She smiled... A pleasing precious smile
I turned away... as if I was fading away
And recalled nothing further from the evening...
What else can I say? ... What else can I invent ?
Maybe the moon hissed her loneliness to me ...
Searching for me more frantically
... ... ...
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