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Angel eyes

... ... ...  
 
I moved away from the counter
I crossed the smoky, noisy bar
I whispered  into a woman's ear ...  
I complimented her on her angel eyes  
She smiled... A pleasing precious smile
 
I turned away... as if I was fading away
And recalled nothing further from the evening...
What else can I say? ... What else can I invent ?
Maybe the moon hissed her loneliness to me ...  
Searching for me more frantically  
 
... ... ...
Written by Marks
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