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Art In tense feelings - with KristinaX
If I get too sweet
That's dangerous
Recede
Back to the violence we made famous
She's the artist
In the midnight blackness
I stole her color once
That was a mistake
I pay now
She keeps the need honest
If I taste bitter
That's sweet
Escalate
Pushing past all the boundaries
He's the canvas
Painting him in the dark
I gave him my color
It corrupts giving me power
I paint now
The art is in intense feelings
That's dangerous
Recede
Back to the violence we made famous
She's the artist
In the midnight blackness
I stole her color once
That was a mistake
I pay now
She keeps the need honest
If I taste bitter
That's sweet
Escalate
Pushing past all the boundaries
He's the canvas
Painting him in the dark
I gave him my color
It corrupts giving me power
I paint now
The art is in intense feelings
Author's Note
Original Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Art In tense feelings - with KristinaX
15th Mar 2021 3:03pm
Nice pairing of poetry and painting ... great collab ... bravo you two ...
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15th Mar 2021 3:06pm
Re. Art In tense feelings - with KristinaX
15th Mar 2021 3:26pm
...Love this collaboration!!!!
Your ingenious narration of influences spills brilliantly with this gem.
Love the exchange of power portrayed brilliantly with artistic connotations.
Artistic Partnership Excellence!
SUPER BIG LIKE!!!!!!!!!!!
Your ingenious narration of influences spills brilliantly with this gem.
Love the exchange of power portrayed brilliantly with artistic connotations.
Artistic Partnership Excellence!
SUPER BIG LIKE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Re. Art In tense feelings - with KristinaX
Thanks Feet
Kristina and I have I a unique vision ...
Look for more between us
We appreciate your generous praise !!!
Appreciate the RL AWARD
Kristina and I have I a unique vision ...
Look for more between us
We appreciate your generous praise !!!
Appreciate the RL AWARD
Re. Art In tense feelings - with KristinaX
15th Mar 2021 4:28pm
Another that wrote itself. I would like to think I am getting better at collaborations but probably not, it just takes the right inspiration. Art is always in intense feelings, right? Thanks for the opportunity to add to this one also.
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Re: Re. Art In tense feelings - with KristinaX
15th Mar 2021 4:39pm
Practice make perfect
We are originals in a world of copies
Thanks for the collaboration Kx
You add intensity at every turn .....
We are originals in a world of copies
Thanks for the collaboration Kx
You add intensity at every turn .....
Re. Art In tense feelings - with KristinaX
15th Mar 2021 10:29pm
Re: Re. Art In tense feelings - with KristinaX
15th Mar 2021 10:37pm
We have a way of writing with each other
We merge into one with art ...
Thx for your comment SO
We merge into one with art ...
Thx for your comment SO
Re. Art In tense feelings - with KristinaX
16th Mar 2021 6:37pm
You two are wonderful. Love the art & the words... the whole package. Congrats on an awesome collaboration! ❤
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Re. Art In tense feelings - with KristinaX
Thanks so much Red
Kristina and I have done a few of these and it gets better and better.
She's an awesome writer and we connect in the art.
Thx for the RL AWARD, as I now call them !!
Xx
Kristina and I have done a few of these and it gets better and better.
She's an awesome writer and we connect in the art.
Thx for the RL AWARD, as I now call them !!
Xx
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17th Mar 2021 5:05am
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Re. Art In tense feelings - with KristinaX
20th Mar 2021 2:10am
Excellent dynamic with play on words and colorful description. You've found a yang to your ying (or ying to your yang), it's a nice balance art and poetry combined.
Excellent work you two!
BIG LIKE
Excellent work you two!
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Art In tense feelings - with KristinaX
20th Mar 2021 2:18am
Kristina and I definitely have a way of telling a story
I am grateful for her passion and participation
It's been a great experience
Stay tuned
More on the way Wally
Thx
I am grateful for her passion and participation
It's been a great experience
Stay tuned
More on the way Wally
Thx