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she's headed
girl undresses boy
sees love rocket hard for her
and gives warm greeting
sees love rocket hard for her
and gives warm greeting
Published 3rd Mar 2021
| Edited 5th Mar 2021
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03.03.2021
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Anonymous
3rd Mar 2021 7:29pm
"Love rocket" made me giggle
3rd Mar 2021 7:44pm
Right on. I wrote this with a comedic frame of mind. I laughed at "love rocket" too.
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2021 7:48pm
I got a kick out of it 😁 I really needed a laugh, so thank you for sharing.
3rd Mar 2021 7:51pm
4th Mar 2021 7:04am
boy blast off to quick (5)
love rocket burst on launch pad (7)
countdown from ten, Done! (5)
....she's head-ing home!
Clever humorous Senryu Erotic Write!
love rocket burst on launch pad (7)
countdown from ten, Done! (5)
....she's head-ing home!
Clever humorous Senryu Erotic Write!
4th Mar 2021 5:06pm
Love rocket, yes! take me to the stars... with the climax of a supernova. ;)
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