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The Art of Obsession and Loss
I live for obsession
Sometimes it's a mess
Can't resist the needle
Expensive fantasies
Vodka from the Ukraine
Drinking that stuff like water
Now wonder I'm always in trouble
Obsession is an art
Abstraction works best
Then you don't have to explain yourself
Realism will bring you down fast
You try to avoid
Like the deer
Glare of the headlights
Close calls
I'm a repeat offender
No excuses
No fault love loss
I take my bruises
Give them back too
You play you pay
Lone rider traveling town to town
She's waiting, crooked smile looking fine
Sometimes it's a mess
Can't resist the needle
Expensive fantasies
Vodka from the Ukraine
Drinking that stuff like water
Now wonder I'm always in trouble
Obsession is an art
Abstraction works best
Then you don't have to explain yourself
Realism will bring you down fast
You try to avoid
Like the deer
Glare of the headlights
Close calls
I'm a repeat offender
No excuses
No fault love loss
I take my bruises
Give them back too
You play you pay
Lone rider traveling town to town
She's waiting, crooked smile looking fine
Published 3rd Mar 2021
Author's Note
This all came to me while taking a long leak ....
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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3rd Mar 2021 3:51pm
"Obsession is an art
Abstraction works best"
I felt this today! I logged off to get sleep and I said 1 stupid line out loud "I love my growth as a writer, my rhymes are definitely tighter" and Morgan Freeman's voice just appeared out of no where "It was at this moment, she knew she f'd up".
Nice write.
Abstraction works best"
I felt this today! I logged off to get sleep and I said 1 stupid line out loud "I love my growth as a writer, my rhymes are definitely tighter" and Morgan Freeman's voice just appeared out of no where "It was at this moment, she knew she f'd up".
Nice write.
3rd Mar 2021 4:24pm
3rd Mar 2021 5:19pm
Let's just say this is what my brain saw when reading this.
Broken filter, I need to shut up and never talk again.
The Art in Obsession and Pain
I live to be obsession
Sometimes I am a mess
Can't resist the torture
Depraved fantasies
Vodka from the Ukraine (Hell yeah)
Drinking you like water
No wonder I'm always wet
I am the art in Obsession
Details are very important
I never explain myself, to hard
Abstract my brains out
I cannot avoid it
Like getting bucked
Condom almost broke
Close calls
I have repeat orgasms
No excuses
No fault rough sex
I take your bruises
And I bite too
You pay me, I'm that good
I am the Lone rider in my town
Waiting, to cause more havoc
Broken filter, I need to shut up and never talk again.
The Art in Obsession and Pain
I live to be obsession
Sometimes I am a mess
Can't resist the torture
Depraved fantasies
Vodka from the Ukraine (Hell yeah)
Drinking you like water
No wonder I'm always wet
I am the art in Obsession
Details are very important
I never explain myself, to hard
Abstract my brains out
I cannot avoid it
Like getting bucked
Condom almost broke
Close calls
I have repeat orgasms
No excuses
No fault rough sex
I take your bruises
And I bite too
You pay me, I'm that good
I am the Lone rider in my town
Waiting, to cause more havoc
This should be comment of the day, week, month
Nobody does it better ...
Comments that is
BIG LIKE COMMENTS HE SAYS ......
Thx Kx
Nobody does it better ...
Comments that is
BIG LIKE COMMENTS HE SAYS ......
Thx Kx
4th Mar 2021 2:14am
It must have been an extra long leak! 🤣
But, quality over quantity - this is the good stuff.
xx
But, quality over quantity - this is the good stuff.
xx
4th Mar 2021 2:21am
Good things happen when writing poems originate from bathroom activities and most likely adult beverages ....
Appreciate the nod k
I had fun writing this one
Part of my new series on my I don't give fuck attitude ...
Happy Face
Xx
Appreciate the nod k
I had fun writing this one
Part of my new series on my I don't give fuck attitude ...
Happy Face
Xx
BIG LIKE!!!...first two words come to my mind brother.
You ''Leaked'' some pretty damn awesome verse with this reflective poem brother.
You are a ''Whiz'' with words!.
Nice Flow!!!
....last two words that come to my mind, ''BIG LIKE''
You ''Leaked'' some pretty damn awesome verse with this reflective poem brother.
You are a ''Whiz'' with words!.
Nice Flow!!!
....last two words that come to my mind, ''BIG LIKE''
4th Mar 2021 9:34am
It's amazing what comes to mind when the need to relieve occurs ..... This is what I call multitasking....
I appreciate your support Feet
More to come
Stay tuned
BIG LIKE 4 YOUR BIG LIKE
Thanks
I appreciate your support Feet
More to come
Stay tuned
BIG LIKE 4 YOUR BIG LIKE
Thanks
7th Mar 2021 7:42am
You are living the life of an artist, that title alone says it all.
Excellent work sir.
Excellent work sir.
7th Mar 2021 11:19am
Yeah the art thing has been good to me, I get to do what I want and every so often a nod of appreciation....
Always appreciate your support Wally
Thx
Always appreciate your support Wally
Thx
