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upon the road to rue
like the road's getting
narrower and darker and
doesn't seem to be going anywhere'll do ..
Published 3rd Mar 2021
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3rd Mar 2021 1:35am
3rd Mar 2021 6:37am
4th Mar 2021 6:23pm
rue is a word .. whatev be the grim tone of it..reminds me of 'रूह' 'rooh' a hindi word ..that means 'atman' or soul.. i feel spiritual..in this traverse of dark ... as yes sacredness is der in this enveloping dark that manifests~ hightlights the light much more intense ... juz me poet:) i love your minimalist takes ..& that clever conjoining you do in der with added essence .. allz well..light love peace prayers, & thanks fr the read:)
4th Mar 2021 11:09pm
21st Apr 2021 9:52pm
& coming bk here again a bit late, to request ..to share this shining example ..of your style & genre of poetry ..your firebrand of inimitably simplistic & minimalist poetry you flow..for POM.. that wud be my pleasure & peace adored poet.. light love ev & hope you keeping best well :)
