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Black Swans - with KristinaX
You torture me
Constantly
I just lie there
in a state of electric
Shock
Bleeding from my heart
We are a perfect union
Sexual darkness
Greed
Chronic desires
Black swans
In a river of pain
Constantly
I just lie there
in a state of electric
Shock
Bleeding from my heart
We are a perfect union
Sexual darkness
Greed
Chronic desires
Black swans
In a river of pain
Author's Note
Psychological After Birth
Photo by KristinaX
Photo by KristinaX
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Re. Black Swans - with KristinaX
26th Feb 2021 2:44pm
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26th Feb 2021 2:50pm
Re. Black Swans - with KristinaX
26th Feb 2021 2:48pm
Re: Re. Black Swans - with KristinaX
26th Feb 2021 2:52pm
Thanks Javalini
Kristina gets the cred on that beauty
Appreciate your comment !
Kristina gets the cred on that beauty
Appreciate your comment !
Re. Black Swans - with KristinaX
26th Feb 2021 2:56pm
I am terrible at collaborations but this one wrote itself; no effort at all which is when they work for me. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to be involved in the creation of this. I love the final result!! And the black swans really took me back to my time in England as a child and adolescent for a moment.
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I loved having the opportunity to write with you.
It came fast and furious and the presentation looks great.
Your Black Swans seal the deal.
They always swim in pairs ....
Appreciate the RL add and you get a BIG LIKE in my book
Thanks Kx
It came fast and furious and the presentation looks great.
Your Black Swans seal the deal.
They always swim in pairs ....
Appreciate the RL add and you get a BIG LIKE in my book
Thanks Kx
Re: Re. Black Swans - with KristinaX
26th Feb 2021 3:09pm
The presentation is great. They are so beautiful and dedicated to each other. I also went through some very bad stuff while I lived in England but the swans were always a majestic and serene escape for me. I could just watch them and day dream about that happiness that they displayed just from being together.
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Re. Black Swans - with KristinaX
26th Feb 2021 8:30pm
Great Collaboration with 2 of DUP's finest artist and people.
This collaborative dark poem is a metaphoric masterstroke of ink.
I am drawn in by the perfect union that is displayed collectively as writers,
and literally conveyed within this masterful write itself....
''Sexual Darkness'' is illuminating Poetry to me, ''Brilliant''!
... on a side note, after KristinaX last XXX erotic gem, I was thinking a Black Swan and a Swallow might be making their splash in a pleasurable river of pain, hahahaha....
Seriously, I love this Poem and to quote one of my most admired artists of DUP....
''BIGGGGGGGGGGG LIKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
This collaborative dark poem is a metaphoric masterstroke of ink.
I am drawn in by the perfect union that is displayed collectively as writers,
and literally conveyed within this masterful write itself....
''Sexual Darkness'' is illuminating Poetry to me, ''Brilliant''!
... on a side note, after KristinaX last XXX erotic gem, I was thinking a Black Swan and a Swallow might be making their splash in a pleasurable river of pain, hahahaha....
Seriously, I love this Poem and to quote one of my most admired artists of DUP....
''BIGGGGGGGGGGG LIKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
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Re: Re. Black Swans - with KristinaX
26th Feb 2021 9:34pm
Feet
This is one of the most awesome comments I have ever received.
Kristina and I had discussed doing a poem together and we decided to each write a stanza. It was a totally organic flow and we really liked writing together on message and vibe !!
Look for more from both of us.
I really appreciate your comments and RL add
Thank you
This is one of the most awesome comments I have ever received.
Kristina and I had discussed doing a poem together and we decided to each write a stanza. It was a totally organic flow and we really liked writing together on message and vibe !!
Look for more from both of us.
I really appreciate your comments and RL add
Thank you
Re. Black Swans - with KristinaX
26th Feb 2021 10:57pm
Re: Re. Black Swans - with KristinaX
26th Feb 2021 11:19pm
Re. Black Swans - with KristinaX
27th Feb 2021 6:16am
I do enjoy how swans are bonded for life and this collaboration does them justice.
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Re: Re. Black Swans - with KristinaX
27th Feb 2021 11:38am
The bonding is just a phenomenal act of nature that we can all look to and marvel. The black swans I imagine must have their issues too but they are pretty and majestic. KristinaX is a pretty person and i was happy to collaborate with her ....
Thank you for your comment Lj
Thank you for your comment Lj
Re. Black Swans - with KristinaX
28th Feb 2021 11:07pm
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28th Feb 2021 11:29pm
Re. Black Swans - with KristinaX
1st Mar 2021 4:16am
I like this. Collaborations are cool. Seen a few around. Think I saw one with Kristinax with someone else, cool.
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Re: Re. Black Swans - with KristinaX
1st Mar 2021 4:20am
Thanks for your comment Remy
I was fortunate to have the opportunity to collab with KristinaX
She's one of the finest writers on this site
Hoping there will be more
Stay Tuned and welcome to the site
I was fortunate to have the opportunity to collab with KristinaX
She's one of the finest writers on this site
Hoping there will be more
Stay Tuned and welcome to the site
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1st Mar 2021 4:24am
Re. Black Swans - with KristinaX
4th Mar 2021 2:52am
That's the good kind of torture, it's sexy and addicting.
Well done you two.
Well done you two.
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4th Mar 2021 3:18am