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Written by
nomoth
Published 21st Feb 2021
Author's Note
entry for #romantic comp
so close
to feel
every cell of
skin flake falling
we talk
at synch
in that private
private ley
and bewilder
the ..
next numb line
we are each
others eye
regarding each
other
unborn
the potential
it has not
happened yet
so close
to feel
every cell of
skin flake falling
we talk
at synch
in that private
private ley
and bewilder
the ..
next numb line
we are each
others eye
regarding each
other
unborn
the potential
it has not
happened yet
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Re. in post
21st Feb 2021 9:38pm
"it has not
happened yet"
I like the build up of tension.
Evocative photo as always. Nice.
happened yet"
I like the build up of tension.
Evocative photo as always. Nice.
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21st Feb 2021 10:25pm
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21st Feb 2021 10:50pm
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22nd Feb 2021 6:59pm
Thanks Eerie.
Its nice to write positively about these relationship things sometimes.
Appreciated as always.:)
Its nice to write positively about these relationship things sometimes.
Appreciated as always.:)
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21st Feb 2021 11:03pm
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22nd Feb 2021 7:00pm
Thanks stranger, hope you are doing ok.
"...puddling momentum" ay?? :)
very appreciated anyways
"...puddling momentum" ay?? :)
very appreciated anyways
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21st Feb 2021 11:28pm
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22nd Feb 2021 7:01pm
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Anonymous
22nd Feb 2021 10:49am
You have a winner here, nomoth.
I looked up "synch" to see if it was correctly spelled, and yes, it is a lesser used variation of "sync". Learned something new today. Thanks! :)
I looked up "synch" to see if it was correctly spelled, and yes, it is a lesser used variation of "sync". Learned something new today. Thanks! :)
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Re: Re. in post
22nd Feb 2021 7:03pm
Thanks so much Johnny...
dont know if maybe its an english thing...idk....i think it is the first time I may ever have used the word.
Again very appreciated
dont know if maybe its an english thing...idk....i think it is the first time I may ever have used the word.
Again very appreciated
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24th Feb 2021 5:14pm
A failing I often note in the erotic/romantic writings is a lack of full dimensions, often too one dimensional carnality or sentiment, without the psychological nuances of longing for intimacy, that tense electric anticipation, an imbuing of the synergy into the milieu. This write holds a very powerful charge in economic subtlety that is palpable and quite admirable, to me.
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