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my little world

big and small

the world is i mean
my small world that is mine
and the world surrounding me
you're too loud
you talk too much
you are too much of an open book
you annoy me
she overshares
who would be her friend
god she irritates me

i'm sorry i just wanted my little world to be apart of yours.
Written by juliagkrimmel (daisygirl)
Published
Author's Note
a poem about being criticized for being too outgoing...
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