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Technicolor Soup
the people watch in anticipation
demanding your love
without question
you are a star
way too hot for me to handle
I speak with integrity
a heart on my sleeve
but it doesn't matter
if I can’t get your attention
like some mystical unicorn
you’re not meant for my world
maybe, just maybe
if you find the time
look over at the guy
who can’t get his eyes off you
maybe, just maybe
you’ll wonder
what’s on his mind
well honestly
I think you’re beautiful
colors burst with one smile
much prettier than any flower
it’s like the background is there
only to complement your features
so intelligent, so independent
there’s no question why
everyone wants your time
perfection being the understatement
the only way I can describe you
maybe, just maybe
if I could get you alone
if only for a moment
I could share with you some thoughts
and you could share some back
maybe, just maybe
I will then die in a pool of technicolor soup
with a smile on my face
because honestly
if you're ever wondering
what is on my mind
it doesn’t take much guessing
demanding your love
without question
you are a star
way too hot for me to handle
I speak with integrity
a heart on my sleeve
but it doesn't matter
if I can’t get your attention
like some mystical unicorn
you’re not meant for my world
maybe, just maybe
if you find the time
look over at the guy
who can’t get his eyes off you
maybe, just maybe
you’ll wonder
what’s on his mind
well honestly
I think you’re beautiful
colors burst with one smile
much prettier than any flower
it’s like the background is there
only to complement your features
so intelligent, so independent
there’s no question why
everyone wants your time
perfection being the understatement
the only way I can describe you
maybe, just maybe
if I could get you alone
if only for a moment
I could share with you some thoughts
and you could share some back
maybe, just maybe
I will then die in a pool of technicolor soup
with a smile on my face
because honestly
if you're ever wondering
what is on my mind
it doesn’t take much guessing
Published 14th Feb 2021
Author's Note
A edit of an older poem of mine. Hope everyone has a great valentine's day 😁
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Just a beautiful write, DC..
It's full of hidden yearning and desire, some of the my all time favorite themes, for sure!
lovely Valentine's Day wishes to you and yours!
Much love and respect,
🌹💖🌹
xo
🐝
It's full of hidden yearning and desire, some of the my all time favorite themes, for sure!
lovely Valentine's Day wishes to you and yours!
Much love and respect,
🌹💖🌹
xo
🐝
14th Feb 2021 11:47am
Definitely feeling the love. Though me and my wife don't really celebrate valentine's day. If we want to do some celebrating we just do that whenever. About a week ago we had a 2nt Christmas lol. You know, just for fun.
Very much appreciate the read and comment. 😁
Very much appreciate the read and comment. 😁
14th Feb 2021 1:29pm
15th Feb 2021 9:01am
15th Feb 2021 6:49pm
Wow! Just gorgeous writing DC. Rest assured she is always wondering what's on your mind or already immersed in it herself. I cannot imagine a more beautiful expression of that lust that sometimes happens spontaneously when we see someone and that instant chemistry is beckoning. So often not acting on it and regretting it deeply. This is an ultimate expression of that admiration, longing, and lust... Perfect in every way... Absolutely love it...
17th Feb 2021 6:33am
