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Forget ~You~ Not
Where lavender and ivy rest at roots of verdant cypresses,
your stems tangled 'round the purest of baby's breath,
and beloved wild daisies.
Painted in shades of heaven and scented
with innocence,
such tenderness took refuge in my veins.
YOU; my precious forget- me- not
to bring sun's warmth,
will forever dwell in the garden of my heart....
your stems tangled 'round the purest of baby's breath,
and beloved wild daisies.
Painted in shades of heaven and scented
with innocence,
such tenderness took refuge in my veins.
YOU; my precious forget- me- not
to bring sun's warmth,
will forever dwell in the garden of my heart....
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Re. Forget ~You~ Not
11th Feb 2021 6:49pm
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11th Feb 2021 7:02pm
Thank you once again today. This one is definitely dear to heart and came effortlessly. 🍃
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11th Feb 2021 7:02pm
Re: Re. Forget ~You~ Not
12th Apr 2024 7:00am
Sorry to have posted and ghosted way back when, but now that I'm back, I must say thank you Ron.
🩷 & ✨ to you too.
🩷 & ✨ to you too.
Re. Forget ~You~ Not
11th Feb 2021 7:09pm
Ah , the walk with a loved one through
the cypress woods of the south ...
This I remember well...
Nicely laid upon the page...
the cypress woods of the south ...
This I remember well...
Nicely laid upon the page...
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Re: Re. Forget ~You~ Not
12th Apr 2024 7:02am
This comment should have came a long time ago. But here I am saying thank you for your thoughts.
Re. Forget ~You~ Not
11th Feb 2021 9:42pm
Dear Pandy, it's so wonderful to e-reader you again. This is so beautifully written❣️❣️
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Re: Re. Forget ~You~ Not
12th Apr 2024 7:05am
Hello, sweet man. Sorry to have posted and ghosted way back when. I'm here though and just had to say thank you. You've always been so kind and supportive.♥️&✨
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11th Feb 2021 10:43pm
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12th Apr 2024 7:06am
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12th Apr 2024 7:09am
Hello, Mr naughty but nice. Thank you for always being so supportive of me. Sorry it wasn't a welcome back way back when. Hopefully I'll stay put.
Re. Forget ~You~ Not
12th Feb 2021 5:42am
Dear P,
Your lovely poem is filled with tenderness and a sweetness that has brought me back to this write several times. I’ve started and deleted my comments, I can’t even tell you how many times because I get to this part and find I don’t have the right words to say other than this poem makes me feel good. Maybe that’s enough?
“ Painted in shades of heaven and scented
with innocence,” I love this phrase for its ethereal beauty. Beautiful write. H🌷
Your lovely poem is filled with tenderness and a sweetness that has brought me back to this write several times. I’ve started and deleted my comments, I can’t even tell you how many times because I get to this part and find I don’t have the right words to say other than this poem makes me feel good. Maybe that’s enough?
“ Painted in shades of heaven and scented
with innocence,” I love this phrase for its ethereal beauty. Beautiful write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Forget ~You~ Not
12th Apr 2024 7:24am
Dearest Honoria,
Sorry to have posted and ghosted way back when, but I can't let commentary go now that I'm here. Your words put a huge smile on my face and my heart smiles to know my poem brought you one. Thank you so much for the kindness bestowed.🌸✨
Sorry to have posted and ghosted way back when, but I can't let commentary go now that I'm here. Your words put a huge smile on my face and my heart smiles to know my poem brought you one. Thank you so much for the kindness bestowed.🌸✨
Re. Forget ~You~ Not
13th Feb 2021 3:55am
Your sweet melody caresses me into a timeless beauty I never want to leave. I feel the old magic you brought this place and me. There is wonder for all who behold.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re: Re. Forget ~You~ Not
12th Apr 2024 7:30am
Aww, John...
That's super sweet to say you felt the magic I once brought this place. Why? Because I never thought I did, nothing to that height at all. Thank you. Sorry to have posted and ghosted. I'll visit your work again when my eyes are clear. 🩷 & ✨
That's super sweet to say you felt the magic I once brought this place. Why? Because I never thought I did, nothing to that height at all. Thank you. Sorry to have posted and ghosted. I'll visit your work again when my eyes are clear. 🩷 & ✨
Re. Forget ~You~ Not
3rd Mar 2021 6:54am
Re: Re. Forget ~You~ Not
12th Apr 2024 7:33am
Another one down in the Underground. But I'm still going to leave a thank you in case you come back.😉
Re. Forget ~You~ Not
20th Mar 2021 8:08am
Lovely love verse. Favourite combinations (for the botanical endearment):
YOU; my precious forget- me- not
'.................
will forever dwell in the garden of my heart.
YOU; my precious forget- me- not
'.................
will forever dwell in the garden of my heart.
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Re: Re. Forget ~You~ Not
12th Apr 2024 7:35am
Thank you Solomon. I've always thought of myself as a wildflower for several reasons and used to keep a flower theme going in older poems.
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12th Apr 2024 7:36am
Thank you Solomon. I've always thought of myself as a wildflower for several reasons and used to keep a flower theme going in older poems.
Re. Forget ~You~ Not
2nd Jan 2023 2:46am
This is beautifully written. It's hard to forget when your heart will always remember. I have a lot of reading to catch up on. Much respect and admiration, from another S.
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Re: Re. Forget ~You~ Not
12th Apr 2024 7:39am
It's never too late to say thank you, so here I am. Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it, lovely Luna. Hopefully you're here. 🌷
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12th Apr 2024 9:45pm
Re. Forget ~You~ Not
23rd Mar 2024 4:58pm
This poem "Forget Not You" beautifully evokes a sense of serenity and deep emotion through its imagery and language. The juxtaposition of delicate flowers like lavender, ivy, baby's breath, and wild daisies against the enduring love symbolized by the forget-me-not creates a poignant and timeless atmosphere. The use of nature imagery to express feelings of tenderness and eternal connection is both evocative and universal, allowing readers to resonate with the themes of love, memory, and permanence. Overall, it's a touching tribute to the enduring nature of love and the cherished memories of those we hold dear.
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Re: Re. Forget ~You~ Not
12th Apr 2024 7:44am
Thank you so much for such a generous and detailed review. I've never really thought myself to be worthy. However..... imagery/feeling has always been big on my list of wishes. Especially love poems. Glad you enjoyed.
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26th Mar 2024 8:43pm
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12th Apr 2024 7:47am
Very much so, yes! Thank you for stopping by to read & comment. I'll be omw to your profile soon.
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