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Evensong...
Meet me at midnight, with honeyed wishes on your lips,
and sanguine rivers pulsing Elysian dreams throughout your veins.
Cradled in the ether, I'll be there waiting....
As I steal the sunshine from your kiss, I'll swirl nocturnes 'round your tongue, breathing fresh life and the psalms of my eternal love into your lungs.
With fingers laced like constellations,
lose yourself in my jewels of blue, as they pierce like shooting stars;
lighting the omniscient path to our place of ethereal affection.
Beneath my chest and ribs, I'll tuck the confessions of your heart,
as our souls cluster like diamonds in the sky;
turning hushed hours into sweet chaos and sacred evensong.
In the midst of this craving,
the moon impatiently waits to be embraced by her sun.......
don't leave me waiting long.
and sanguine rivers pulsing Elysian dreams throughout your veins.
Cradled in the ether, I'll be there waiting....
As I steal the sunshine from your kiss, I'll swirl nocturnes 'round your tongue, breathing fresh life and the psalms of my eternal love into your lungs.
With fingers laced like constellations,
lose yourself in my jewels of blue, as they pierce like shooting stars;
lighting the omniscient path to our place of ethereal affection.
Beneath my chest and ribs, I'll tuck the confessions of your heart,
as our souls cluster like diamonds in the sky;
turning hushed hours into sweet chaos and sacred evensong.
In the midst of this craving,
the moon impatiently waits to be embraced by her sun.......
don't leave me waiting long.
Published 11th Feb 2021
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11th Feb 2021 6:55pm
11th Feb 2021 7:01pm
Thank you so much, D. It's good to see a welcome face. Uber Pandy hugs!💙
11th Feb 2021 7:00pm
11th Feb 2021 7:03pm
"Meet me at midnight, with honeyed wishes on your lips,
and sanguine rivers pulsing Elysian dreams throughout your veins."
And *this* was but the beginning of your rendering
of poetic beauty , and the engagement of souls !
Well done , yet is that not your norm of expression ?
I have missed your words...
and sanguine rivers pulsing Elysian dreams throughout your veins."
And *this* was but the beginning of your rendering
of poetic beauty , and the engagement of souls !
Well done , yet is that not your norm of expression ?
I have missed your words...
11th Feb 2021 7:08pm
Grabbed me from the start. This is what poetry is all about. Don't stray from your style.
11th Feb 2021 10:31pm
Gorgeous writing Pandy! It is so nice to see you back! you have definitely been missed.
11th Feb 2021 10:42pm
Beautiful, Pandy ... You always have a way of capturing and elevating ... Love to prayer ... Bless and love ...
12th Feb 2021 5:58am
Favourite lines, for romanticism:
With fingers laced like constellations,
lose yourself in my jewels of blue, as they pierce like shooting stars;
With fingers laced like constellations,
lose yourself in my jewels of blue, as they pierce like shooting stars;
13th Feb 2021 3:52am
Gorgeous metaphors are woven in the deep river song of a woman who knows the pulse of her amour. This sings me with the tonality of a songbird in passion. The profundity of your passion washes into me like a sweet Jamaican surf that puts me into the reverie I needed tonight.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
3rd Mar 2021 6:47am
What a nice comeback . As l steel the sunshine from your lips with a kiss . xx
20th Mar 2021 8:10am
Yearning loving read. Favourite lines (evoking the passionate kiss):
As I steal the sunshine from your kiss, I'll swirl nocturnes 'round your tongue, breathing fresh life and the psalms of my eternal love into your lungs.
With fingers laced like constellations,
lose yourself in my jewels of blue, as they pierce like shooting stars; [beautiful metaphor for the eyes]
As I steal the sunshine from your kiss, I'll swirl nocturnes 'round your tongue, breathing fresh life and the psalms of my eternal love into your lungs.
With fingers laced like constellations,
lose yourself in my jewels of blue, as they pierce like shooting stars; [beautiful metaphor for the eyes]
27th Jun 2021 5:31am
2nd Jan 2023 2:48am
I love the imagery your words painted. It's so sweet and full of genuine love. We could all use such tenderness in our lives. Nicely written, my dear.
