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Winter in Black and White
Cold
Grey
Dank
Goes on and on
Like it best post snow storms
Walking along the river
Watching out for black ice
Less people out
Alone in my thoughts
Grey
Dank
Goes on and on
Like it best post snow storms
Walking along the river
Watching out for black ice
Less people out
Alone in my thoughts
Author's Note
Thoughts, art, reflection
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Re. Winter in Black and White
10th Feb 2021 2:57pm
....lots of depth here Poet. Your need for solitude to clear your mind and reflect on your creativity in Art spills from this poem. Giving color to your Winter in your minds eye to create art. Your need for Cold and dreary to dream warm memories in full bloom is the vibe I get here. You are an Artist Brother!
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Re: Re. Winter in Black and White
10th Feb 2021 3:01pm
I've always needed people but not so close
To be able to expressly freely is my need
It was gone for a long time but has come rushing back
I'm grateful for your comments, they warm me in my journey
Thank you Feet
To be able to expressly freely is my need
It was gone for a long time but has come rushing back
I'm grateful for your comments, they warm me in my journey
Thank you Feet
Re. Winter in Black and White
10th Feb 2021 2:57pm
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10th Feb 2021 3:02pm
Re. Winter in Black and White
10th Feb 2021 4:32pm
It’s taken me a long time to appreciate nature’s need to rest. I now find beauty in her sleep.
A walk after snowfall is magical. There is an insulated quiet that allows for breathing.
Lovely work, here, Poet.
A walk after snowfall is magical. There is an insulated quiet that allows for breathing.
Lovely work, here, Poet.
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Re: Re. Winter in Black and White
10th Feb 2021 4:41pm
That’s a good way to put it E, a need to rest ....
Thank you for your beautiful comment !!
Thank you for your beautiful comment !!
Re. Winter in Black and White
11th Feb 2021 4:07am
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11th Feb 2021 1:12pm
Re. Winter in Black and White
11th Feb 2021 5:37am
Dear PS,
A walk after a snowfall is church without the bs of clergy. You can truly appreciate god through his/her creation. Love the poem and the painting. H🌷
A walk after a snowfall is church without the bs of clergy. You can truly appreciate god through his/her creation. Love the poem and the painting. H🌷
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Re: Re. Winter in Black and White
11th Feb 2021 1:13pm
Thank you H
That is such a great comment, appreciate the way you see it .....
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That is such a great comment, appreciate the way you see it .....
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Re. Winter in Black and White
16th Feb 2021 4:32am
The snow storm everyone is experiencing on the east coast sounds very scary. Your piece here kind of puts things in perspective.
Hope you're doing well.
Hope you're doing well.
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Re: Re. Winter in Black and White
16th Feb 2021 12:38pm
The last storm we had last week is still on the ground in many spots. Rain today will wash more away just in time for the next one in a couple of days. Winter cycle......
Hope it's warm by you .....
Thx Wally
Hope it's warm by you .....
Thx Wally
Re: Re. Winter in Black and White
19th Feb 2021 6:27pm
It was a cool 42 degrees when I went on my run this morning, nothing that a hoodie and running pants can handle, with a high of 69 later. So I can't complain.
We get the drought here, barely any rain in southern California, all the rain is northern part of the state and to the Sierras.
We get the drought here, barely any rain in southern California, all the rain is northern part of the state and to the Sierras.
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Re: Re. Winter in Black and White
19th Feb 2021 6:31pm
We get the cold and you get the warm and fires ....
Hopefully not by you though ....
Hopefully not by you though ....