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Bloodied And Blurred (NoPoo 88)
Inadequacy
I feel
Is a burning light
That breaks deep
Into the darkness
My thoughts
Meagre words
Are nothing
Like specs of blood
In my eye
There to torment
Laugh at my inability
To find emotional parity
From feelings that tear
But never conveyed deeply
Pretending
I am a poet
Just a poor imitater
Struggling to keep afloat
Gasping for air
Words are blurry
No clarity
What talent
Its a mess of blotted ink
Splattered on a page
I feel
Is a burning light
That breaks deep
Into the darkness
My thoughts
Meagre words
Are nothing
Like specs of blood
In my eye
There to torment
Laugh at my inability
To find emotional parity
From feelings that tear
But never conveyed deeply
Pretending
I am a poet
Just a poor imitater
Struggling to keep afloat
Gasping for air
Words are blurry
No clarity
What talent
Its a mess of blotted ink
Splattered on a page
Published 7th Feb 2021
| Edited 12th Feb 2021
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For the thread NoPoo 88 of 365
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7th Feb 2021 10:56am
You're still better, even when you might be @ 50%....
So there.
;)
Fucking kickass poem.
Well done you
So there.
;)
Fucking kickass poem.
Well done you
7th Feb 2021 12:44pm
Awesome resonating write ... expresses how I feel so often ... so eloquently ...
7th Feb 2021 3:08pm
You are an artist and a writer, MAN. Feel free to feed your poetry with your doubt.
