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Lost in the void
I gave you my love and it was as if your soul was an empty void. I watched as my love disappeared like the heart of the ocean sinking to the bottom of the deep blue sea.
Published 1st Feb 2021
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2nd Feb 2021 2:42am
Looking good, Meganne. Pop star quality. Ok, I know you will want me to look at the poem, so I will. Unrequited love. A love that is not reciprocated or indeed understood. I do like your short poems. They are usually raw & to the point.
2nd Feb 2021 8:09pm
2nd Feb 2021 10:32pm
Love the picture Meganne; and what you did with the colors is marvelous. I agree with Billy, this is very concise but definitely raw and the point hits home.
4th Feb 2021 8:50pm
The words and pictures make this a masterpiece. Thanks for sharing. Hugs and peace, oral
