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No plan
As I watch and wish...
If you finally noticed me,
what would happen next?
Author's Note
Inspired by "Watching You" by PoetSpeak
Got me thinking about my millions of crushes over the years.
Got me thinking about my millions of crushes over the years.
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Re. No plan
29th Jan 2021 3:08pm
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30th Jan 2021 00:00am
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Re: Re. No plan
30th Jan 2021 00:02am
Glad you enjoyed it!
We want what we want, but don't always know what to do with it. Life is a series of surprises, I guess...
Thanks
k
We want what we want, but don't always know what to do with it. Life is a series of surprises, I guess...
Thanks
k
Re. No plan
29th Jan 2021 6:43pm
I say hello, and you freeze! : )
Just kidding, interesting premise and the worst part is we think of about 50 different possible scenarios that in reality have about 0.1% probability, but you dwell on them, and don't act.
Just kidding, interesting premise and the worst part is we think of about 50 different possible scenarios that in reality have about 0.1% probability, but you dwell on them, and don't act.
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Re: Re. No plan
30th Jan 2021 00:04am
Yes, that is exactly what would happen! Are you inside my head...?
Thanks for the read & comment!
Thanks for the read & comment!
Re. No plan
29th Jan 2021 8:03pm
Dear K,
You too? Me too! I fall in lust- I mean love- at least twice a day! I’m worse than a teenager. I can build a life with a total stranger and my target never even knows I’ve married, bore them children I don’t want and moved on and all in less than 60 seconds. I do like how this write has suggested a myriad of thoughts in such brevity. My queen, well done. H🌷
You too? Me too! I fall in lust- I mean love- at least twice a day! I’m worse than a teenager. I can build a life with a total stranger and my target never even knows I’ve married, bore them children I don’t want and moved on and all in less than 60 seconds. I do like how this write has suggested a myriad of thoughts in such brevity. My queen, well done. H🌷
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Re: Re. No plan
30th Jan 2021 00:07am
Ah yes, the everyday lusts are fun... even worse are the long-nursed crushes, the ones you watch but never approach....
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Re. No plan
29th Jan 2021 8:43pm
I have felt this way so many times in my life. You brought the feeling to life. 🙏🌹
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30th Jan 2021 00:07am
Re. No plan
29th Jan 2021 9:04pm
brokentitanium (k.),
I always appreciate a thought-provoking terse verse. Hmmmm my position on what would happen next?... hmmmm Karma Sutra happens next, without trying to put you in an ''awkward position'', lol ....nice tribute to PoetSpeak.
I always appreciate a thought-provoking terse verse. Hmmmm my position on what would happen next?... hmmmm Karma Sutra happens next, without trying to put you in an ''awkward position'', lol ....nice tribute to PoetSpeak.
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Re: Re. No plan
30th Jan 2021 00:09am
LOL Rumour has it there are a few awkward positions to be had there... 😉
Thanks, Feet
Thanks, Feet
Re. No plan
1st Feb 2021 2:14am
What would happen next... I have some ideas on that. lol Absolutely loved this. Great inspired write... :)
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Re: Re. No plan
1st Feb 2021 2:26am
Historically, what usually happens next is... absolutely nothing! That's the problem with not having a plan...
Thanks, KX, glad you liked it 🙂
Thanks, KX, glad you liked it 🙂
Re. No plan
9th Feb 2021 10:06pm
Re: Re. No plan
10th Feb 2021 3:36am
It's almost better, sitting in that delicious what-if state, than moving on to whatever comes next...
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