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Sunday sentiment
I made supper
You provided dessert
a walk
some Scrabble
Us two
lounging on the couch
with tea and words
I taught you
about the Beatles and LSD
You taught me
how to organize my email
We're good for each other
You provided dessert
a walk
some Scrabble
Us two
lounging on the couch
with tea and words
I taught you
about the Beatles and LSD
You taught me
how to organize my email
We're good for each other
Author's Note
Appreciating the value of a steady flame
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Re. Sunday sentiment
1st Feb 2021 2:35am
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1st Feb 2021 2:51am
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1st Feb 2021 2:55am
Yes, I need reminders to enjoy the little things.
Thanks for reading & commenting!
Thanks for reading & commenting!
Re. Sunday sentiment
1st Feb 2021 3:02am
A case of opposites attract? I really enjoyed this little peek of everyday life.
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2nd Feb 2021 3:50am
Very, very opposite. Very.
It's good that I have these moments of appreciating the differences sometimes.
Thanks!
It's good that I have these moments of appreciating the differences sometimes.
Thanks!
Re. Sunday sentiment
1st Feb 2021 3:02am
I so love this K, so sweet and so real ♥️
Adorable playful and honest 🤗
Zazz ☺️
Adorable playful and honest 🤗
Zazz ☺️
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2nd Feb 2021 3:51am
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2nd Feb 2021 3:51am
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1st Feb 2021 5:08am
Dear K,
Bliss. Your lovely write washed over me in total bliss. I loved the straight forward language and the sheer togetherness of the relationship. Beautiful. H🌷
Bliss. Your lovely write washed over me in total bliss. I loved the straight forward language and the sheer togetherness of the relationship. Beautiful. H🌷
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2nd Feb 2021 3:52am
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The essentials, "tea and words." K you describe a perfect date. I love supper, dessert, and scrabble😁 Seems some generational bridge building went on as well. As with so much of your work. You brought me peace 🙏🌹
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2nd Feb 2021 3:54am
Yes, I can see how this could be an inter-generational thing too - good call! In this case, it's just a case of opposite personalities, strengths & gifts.
Thanks!
Thanks!
Re. Sunday sentiment
1st Feb 2021 2:45pm
I am loving this brokentitanium,
Life's perfect balance of love and marriage
.........picturing this beautiful couple
''in a boat on a river with tangerine trees and marmalade skies''
High on life!
Life's perfect balance of love and marriage
.........picturing this beautiful couple
''in a boat on a river with tangerine trees and marmalade skies''
High on life!
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2nd Feb 2021 3:56am
It's maybe been too many years for the "high on life" phase, but we are definitely approaching some sort of balance. Life is good.
Thank you!
Thank you!
Re. Sunday sentiment
3rd Feb 2021 11:34pm
This was great - I got a chuckle out of the next to last paragraph. Simple things mean alot.
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Re: Re. Sunday sentiment
4th Feb 2021 1:32pm
It's good when we share and appreciate our very different strengths and worldviews! Thanks for stopping by to read & comment, much appreciated.
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Re: Re. Sunday sentiment
4th Feb 2021 1:36pm
Thank you, Ethan.... often less is more, right?
Glad you enjoyed it; thanks for the love! 🙂
k
Glad you enjoyed it; thanks for the love! 🙂
k
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