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Senryu - Texas Winter Rain
Pregnant clouds discharge
lightening strikes
FLASH!
CRACK!
BOOM!
sweet petrichor reigns
lightening strikes
FLASH!
CRACK!
BOOM!
sweet petrichor reigns
Author's Note
Just in a bombastic mood today. I love cold rainy days when they when they yield that soul satisfying petrichor scent.
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Re. Senryu - Texas Winter Rain
Ohhh me, too!
Love the format and word play...
Now, to snuggle!!!
hahahaha ;)
🌹
xo
B
Love the format and word play...
Now, to snuggle!!!
hahahaha ;)
🌹
xo
B
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Re: Re. Senryu - Texas Winter Rain
25th Jan 2021 10:36pm
I just added the image
Indeed it is snuggle time🐻💋🐻💋🐻
Thank you for your kind words...I am pleased that you like the piece.
Indeed it is snuggle time🐻💋🐻💋🐻
Thank you for your kind words...I am pleased that you like the piece.
Re. Senryu - Texas Winter Rain
25th Jan 2021 11:13pm
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25th Jan 2021 11:20pm
Yeah. I love power in a+ Texas thunderstorm except when it knocks the power out. I marvel at how violently it shakes the house. I am pleased that you like the piece and that you too appreciste a good rain storm...I'll bet you have some doozies up yonder.
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Re: Re. Senryu - Texas Winter Rain
30th Jan 2021 8:53pm
Ethan,
Thank you so much for reading and commenting on this piece. I too love to walk in the woods just after a rain, especially a cold rain and they are rare in Texas. Because the scent is not as prevalent here as it is in my home sate, California, I have to grown to consider it more of a treasure.
I am elated that you saw the fun in the piece...and that you enjoyed the Batman stylized amplifications of the ACTION! words ⚡💥. I did my best to describe the immense power in a Texas thunderstorm they are damn thrilling and at times terrifying...Especially if one, like us, has a lot of large, tall trees on their property. Amazing how verbose I can get when commenting on 17 syllables.
Than you again, sir, for your encouragement.🙏
Thank you so much for reading and commenting on this piece. I too love to walk in the woods just after a rain, especially a cold rain and they are rare in Texas. Because the scent is not as prevalent here as it is in my home sate, California, I have to grown to consider it more of a treasure.
I am elated that you saw the fun in the piece...and that you enjoyed the Batman stylized amplifications of the ACTION! words ⚡💥. I did my best to describe the immense power in a Texas thunderstorm they are damn thrilling and at times terrifying...Especially if one, like us, has a lot of large, tall trees on their property. Amazing how verbose I can get when commenting on 17 syllables.
Than you again, sir, for your encouragement.🙏
Re. Senryu - Texas Winter Rain
26th Jan 2021 2:02am
Re: Re. Senryu - Texas Winter Rain
30th Jan 2021 9:10pm
Thank you dear Siren❣️❣️ Need to get back to reading your exciting work💥😍 You have settled in nicely here in DUP...happy to observe and enjoy your talent.
Re. Senryu - Texas Winter Rain
27th Jan 2021 10:38am
Dear GW,
You’ve nailed it all in this one write beautifully! The format and picture, I’d kill to be able to do at all but then you wrote about a thunder storm, which I see I’m not alone in the admiration thereof. You’ve hit a trifecta with this one.
Awesome piece. H🌷
You’ve nailed it all in this one write beautifully! The format and picture, I’d kill to be able to do at all but then you wrote about a thunder storm, which I see I’m not alone in the admiration thereof. You’ve hit a trifecta with this one.
Awesome piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. Senryu - Texas Winter Rain
30th Jan 2021 9:18pm
Dear Honoria, you always give me such an ego boost with your kind and encouraging comment. If you are interested I can show you how to create graphics such as these very easily. Hit me up in a PM. I am so pleased that you like the piece and that we share a love of thunderstorms. Trifecta, like hat-trick, is such a wonderful way to describe mastery...turkey in bowling, not so much😜 Muchissimas gracia maestra poeta!
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5th Feb 2021 5:08pm
Thank you so much, ❣️ I was going to use scent but reign better describes the pervasiveness the scent and it's also a play on the rainy theme. I appreciate your kind words.