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Store.
Orange juice.
Line.
The guy.
Those eyes.
Could've died.
Never forgotten.
Etched into the mind.
Orange juice.
Line.
The guy.
Those eyes.
Could've died.
Never forgotten.
Etched into the mind.
Published 25th Jan 2021
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Art by Michelle Flowers.
Art by Michelle Flowers.
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25th Jan 2021 6:42pm
25th Jan 2021 7:17pm
25th Jan 2021 8:04pm
Love the silhouette of the lines ... the shape ... crisp stark write ... a la nikkimoe ...
25th Jan 2021 9:19pm
27th Jan 2021 9:28am
Dear N,
Wonderful story in sixteen words.
Sometimes that’s all it takes to describe a love that lasts forever. 16 words. And a bottle of orange juice. Fabulous picture accompanying the sharp write. Witty and sophisticated piece! H🌷
Wonderful story in sixteen words.
Sometimes that’s all it takes to describe a love that lasts forever. 16 words. And a bottle of orange juice. Fabulous picture accompanying the sharp write. Witty and sophisticated piece! H🌷
27th Jan 2021 2:55pm
eyes.. eyes.. the soulsuns are they .. intense niks!
love love love the spacing & sparseness ..the emphasis in all minimalism .. screams inner
for me, L6, & of course L5.. killer lines.. you stun me agn & agn & agn &.. ev :) light & love x
love love love the spacing & sparseness ..the emphasis in all minimalism .. screams inner
for me, L6, & of course L5.. killer lines.. you stun me agn & agn & agn &.. ev :) light & love x
27th Jan 2021 7:51pm
28th Jan 2021 4:56pm
