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chances of tender insecurity (a senryś)
he loves me, he loves
me not, he loves me, he loves
me not..... he loves me
Published 19th Jan 2021
Author's Note
January Senryu Theme: Insecurities
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19th Jan 2021 5:24pm
19th Jan 2021 6:09pm
20th Jan 2021 1:07am
20th Jan 2021 3:13am
Brava, Blue❣❣ This evokes memories of simpler times when we played this game with such childish solemnity and hope. I can still feel that deep yearning for an idyllic outcome that most of the time taught me the true meaning of "CRUSH!" 😍🐻💋🐻💋🐻
19th Jan 2021 6:13pm
Dearest B,
You nailed it! My mom would plant black-eyed Susans in the flower bed around our house and some of my earliest memories are pulling those yellow petals juuuust so (perhaps cheating, but only a tinge) to ensure that he did 'love me'...
To this day, I can't look at black-eyed Susans without feeling that ache... lol
Ty for reading and your thoughtful remarks!
I'm appreciative!
🌹
xo
You nailed it! My mom would plant black-eyed Susans in the flower bed around our house and some of my earliest memories are pulling those yellow petals juuuust so (perhaps cheating, but only a tinge) to ensure that he did 'love me'...
To this day, I can't look at black-eyed Susans without feeling that ache... lol
Ty for reading and your thoughtful remarks!
I'm appreciative!
🌹
xo
19th Jan 2021 5:39pm
He better live you or I'll run him over in my wheelchair because you are a bundle of awesomeness
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
19th Jan 2021 6:32pm
hahaha lmao... I'm 😂 laughing SO HARD!!
My brave Knight!
⚔
Thank you for reading, Ron
Luckily 'Tis only a senryś and not reality!!!
Your wrath is not needed (yet!)
🌹
lol..
Much love,
xoxo
B
My brave Knight!
⚔
Thank you for reading, Ron
Luckily 'Tis only a senryś and not reality!!!
Your wrath is not needed (yet!)
🌹
lol..
Much love,
xoxo
B
19th Jan 2021 6:47pm
Its my job to protect the Queen lol
My wraith is at your disposal lol
Love and light
Ron, xx
My wraith is at your disposal lol
Love and light
Ron, xx
19th Jan 2021 6:50pm
19th Jan 2021 6:47pm
19th Jan 2021 7:10pm
5-7-5 (syllables)....mad respect, my way to respond to your talent Blue...
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19th Jan 2021 8:24pm
My eternal battle, self esteem..
Ty for the list add and your genuine comments.
💜
xoxo
Ty for the list add and your genuine comments.
💜
xoxo
19th Jan 2021 6:03pm
The not-truly knowing is the cancer of the soul ... Grab him and shake the truth loose ... For better or worse ... It's better ... Bless and love ... ..
I agree with you FeNyX.. the not knowing is it's own particular cruel torture.
Ty for reading
💜
xoxo
Ty for reading
💜
xoxo
20th Jan 2021 1:08am
20th Jan 2021 1:09am
20th Jan 2021 1:24am
Hey lady!!
Sooo good to see you and I'm so glad you enjoyed this little senryś! ..just a little lightness today, at least so far... lol.
Ty for that list add and your lovely comments
I'm so grateful for you!
🤗💜🤗
xo
-BB
Sooo good to see you and I'm so glad you enjoyed this little senryś! ..just a little lightness today, at least so far... lol.
Ty for that list add and your lovely comments
I'm so grateful for you!
🤗💜🤗
xo
-BB
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