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Nature Lovers
Midday Sun burns bright
Illuminating blanket
on Winter grass spread
eager to continue
what they started last night
naked lovers together melt
atop their exhibitionist bed
Steady breeze
with windchimes collide
nature serenades
the libidinous pair
tongue and phallus slide inside
moans enraptured
split the air
Prying neighbors peek through cracks in fences
all aroused, some appalled
by such devilish offenses
yet hid behind their pius facade
they yearn to be involved
Consumed by ardent passion
kisses growing more intense
flesh fused even tighter
exchanging fluid recompense
carnal desires sated
still in close embrace they linger
flame of love n'er dissipated
tween these nature bound sinners
Illuminating blanket
on Winter grass spread
eager to continue
what they started last night
naked lovers together melt
atop their exhibitionist bed
Steady breeze
with windchimes collide
nature serenades
the libidinous pair
tongue and phallus slide inside
moans enraptured
split the air
Prying neighbors peek through cracks in fences
all aroused, some appalled
by such devilish offenses
yet hid behind their pius facade
they yearn to be involved
Consumed by ardent passion
kisses growing more intense
flesh fused even tighter
exchanging fluid recompense
carnal desires sated
still in close embrace they linger
flame of love n'er dissipated
tween these nature bound sinners
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published 16th Jan 2021
| Edited 17th Jan 2021
Author's Note
I realize this is an impossible scenario in most Winter locations.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Nature Lovers
16th Jan 2021 11:08pm
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17th Jan 2021 3:30am
Ha ha...I guess the read is a bit of voyeurism. Thank you very much for your comment.
Re. Nature Lovers
Terrific desire and imagery... This is probably one of the reasons why people love Florida in the winter! I enjoyed reading and fantasizing. ;)
It's nice to safely indulge my inner voyeur once in a while... 😉 naughty Blue!
Hee hee hee
Ty for sharing!
xo
-B
It's nice to safely indulge my inner voyeur once in a while... 😉 naughty Blue!
Hee hee hee
Ty for sharing!
xo
-B
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Thank you so much, Blue🌹I am glad my poem led you to fantasize 🥰 No higher praise for an erotic piece. Your wrs certainly make me do so, S😘 And both Texas and Florida arce suited for Winter, outdoor luv'n.
Re. Nature Lovers
17th Jan 2021 9:40pm
I agree with Susan. Nice equipoise between form and intimacy of details Bob. Happy New Year Brother. 💖🙏
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Re: Re. Nature Lovers
17th Jan 2021 10:15pm
Thank you very much, Daniel! I am eminently pleased that you enjoy this piece. I am paticularly pleased that you find it well balanced. I am still not completely sold on my last night line.
Cheers,
My Brother
🙏
Cheers,
My Brother
🙏
Re. Nature Lovers
17th Jan 2021 10:21pm
Ah ... windchimes ... on my balcony ... so long ago ... thanks for bringing the memory back ...
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Re: Re. Nature Lovers
17th Jan 2021 10:28pm
I am so glad you keyed on the winchimes...they and sage remind me of my grandma's garden. Onviously, in this particular scenario, i would not want grandma around to see what transpires. Merci beacoup mon tres jolie amie❣❣
Re. Nature Lovers
18th Jan 2021 5:40pm
A wonderful view you paint here Bob ♥️🤗
I always enjoy your pen good man ☺️
Zazzles Xx 🌹
I always enjoy your pen good man ☺️
Zazzles Xx 🌹
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18th Jan 2021 6:57pm
Thsml you so much, Jackie🐻💋 I'm glad you see and enjoy the full scope of my vision❤
Re. Nature Lovers
20th Jan 2021 4:31pm
Dear GW, the best show is passionately living life and those who are not eagerly watch; some are excited, others jealous, and others are disgusted (but inwardly excited and jealous as well). Beautiful imagery and trust me it is possible anywhere during the winter. The cold only gives you more incentive to find the warmth spilling inside. :p
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20th Jan 2021 9:40pm
Dear Kristina, you get me so well❣❣ I'm thrilled that you, a seductive proponent of exhibitionism, enjoyed my poem. I love and chuckled at your comment about all-weather sex. 🐻💋🐻💋🐻
Re. Nature Lovers
24th Jan 2021 6:43am
Fyah... carnal intensity. That feeling that time and space stop and all that exists is that moment, the next touch, kiss... great read
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Re: Re. Nature Lovers
24th Jan 2021 7:11am
Thank you so much, Siren❣ I am glad you enjoyed the read. Your comment captures the romance I intended to convey with the write.
Re. Nature Lovers
29th Jan 2021 7:38am
I borrowed this for my wife to read as I think it is so close to where we are but loving our own nature. Great poem
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Re: Re. Nature Lovers
29th Jan 2021 7:55am
Thank you for your kind words. I am glad you like the piece enough to share it with your wife.
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29th Jan 2021 8:24am
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29th Jan 2021 1:30pm