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pyre
the darkness rage inside the greed
needing form it sought its Queen
visions of night's glory defamed
blame it on the hurt inside, ravenous she bites
the dark grew hungry it will not be denied
times two it hunts the unwary
picking which soul to descend upon
hexed and besotten they gather
a mob cheering for their own slaughter
their captors perform deadly rituals before them
not seeing, they applaud in beat with the music
their lasts rites given
into the nine circles, they are bidden
a feast for the fury they die inside his kingdom
a demon's delight
new souls to plunder
more fuel for the fire
they scream in unison
Published 14th Jan 2021
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14th Jan 2021 3:41pm
fire and brimstone.... just what we expect from you. particularly like “hexed and besotten” x
15th Jan 2021 1:16pm
good morning dearest Anna thank you for checking out my writing I'm happy you liked this ❤
14th Jan 2021 3:44pm
Absolutely awesome, dark moving or powerful
My sort of poetry
Great job, love your dark side
Love and light and a dark desire
Ron xx
My sort of poetry
Great job, love your dark side
Love and light and a dark desire
Ron xx
15th Jan 2021 1:17pm
thank you graciously dearest Ron I had to feed your need for a touch of darkness today 🌹
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14th Jan 2021 7:04pm
....I am so intrigued by your dark and thought provoking poetry. You have an uncanny way, no matter how horrid to shine a light on beautiful poetry simply by shear poetic flair.
15th Jan 2021 1:19pm
good morning dearest poet thank you for your interest in my darker writes I can get much darker but a lot of people don't care for it... especially given I am so gentle in other writes...I'm happy this spoke to you 💕
14th Jan 2021 8:59pm
Completely agree with Ron, absolutely awesome, dark moving, and powerful. For me the imagery is stunning and every word is perfectly placed all the way from the title. People so easily led by evil into the nine circles of hell. Hurt, lust, revenge, sin, suffering, fire, rituals, magic, hell, anger, music, death, demons; you have a hell of a lot going on in this one.
15th Jan 2021 1:23pm
good morning beautiful Kristina thank you graciously you know when I wrote this it just came to me...not until you pointed it out did I realize there was so much going on in it...really it's kind of a short poem to be addressing so much I deeply appreciate you sharing what you saw in it 💕
15th Jan 2021 5:12pm
That's just the sign of a beautiful mind that you can incorporate so much effortlessly; although surely a sign of someone who has faced tremendous adversity and trials as well but those are the minds with the greatest depth. It would take a much longer comment to truly explore the possible meanings and symbolism in each aspect of this. Especially considering the brevity, it is truly incredible.
16th Jan 2021 2:22am
Couldn't help but think of the Salem witch trials for a second but also with something more dark and sinister. You really knocked this one out of the park with painting so true vivid themes.
Awesome work dear crim.
Awesome work dear crim.
