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Another collection of thoughts
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sneezed in the post office
might as well have pulled a cord
for all the eyes which flashed a terror
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There's a train leaving town
wont have to worry bout nuthin
no more, be sure you're holdin'
the right ticket
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It's good to see you, my friend
have you any idea what's happenin'
I'm really struggling with the whole thing
sneezed in the post office
might as well have pulled a cord
for all the eyes which flashed a terror
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There's a train leaving town
wont have to worry bout nuthin
no more, be sure you're holdin'
the right ticket
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It's good to see you, my friend
have you any idea what's happenin'
I'm really struggling with the whole thing
Published 11th Jan 2021
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11th Jan 2021 7:36pm
Great to see the 20 words in a comp. I spent ages today looking for the thread in the forums, only to find it is now in groups, which sucks much, where is the fun in that. If I can come up with something decent off of the top of my head, I will enter it in Missy's comp.
I sneezed lots in the summer with hay fever, I felt like I committed a crime the way everyone looked at me. Now I know how a vampire feels.
Might see you there lep. If not, good luck :P
I sneezed lots in the summer with hay fever, I felt like I committed a crime the way everyone looked at me. Now I know how a vampire feels.
Might see you there lep. If not, good luck :P
12th Jan 2021 1:47am
Hullo, lady
If you dont mind me saying I was hoping you'd stay away from the comp. ...but nooooo. so fight me :),
a pleasure to read you here, lady so thank you. and thanks for dropping by in the first place. much appreciated
If you dont mind me saying I was hoping you'd stay away from the comp. ...but nooooo. so fight me :),
a pleasure to read you here, lady so thank you. and thanks for dropping by in the first place. much appreciated
11th Jan 2021 8:41pm
12th Jan 2021 1:48am
Hullo
Happy to get you one way or the other. many thanks for your visit and thoughts
Happy to get you one way or the other. many thanks for your visit and thoughts
11th Jan 2021 9:48pm
Your collection of thoughts are a gift... just as your existence is a gift to those who’ve been graced in sharing your energy !
It’s always lovely to read you...😎
It’s always lovely to read you...😎
12th Jan 2021 1:50am
Hullo, Lena
see, if you'd had said the a few weeks ago I'd have sent you an xmas card, haha
your eyes and thoughts are always welcome here , Morgan that. thanks many much's
see, if you'd had said the a few weeks ago I'd have sent you an xmas card, haha
your eyes and thoughts are always welcome here , Morgan that. thanks many much's
13th Jan 2021 4:50am
I hear you Eamonn. Terrifically understated and yet potent with honesty and presence in your unique manner.
16th Jan 2021 4:48pm
22nd Jan 2021 1:44pm
An amusing stream-of -onsciousness with an intriguing structure. It begins with a solid and minor event in a specific setting and progresses into abstract fear and pleading. Resembles a lot of people's consciousnesses right now, I'd wager.
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23rd Jan 2021 1:18am
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23rd Jan 2021 4:40pm
Don't sneeze unless you want to see people drop to the floor in horror. lol In which case, carry some pepper and have fun. I miss the train, I love how you tied it to having nothing to worry about. (if you get the right ticket). We will be struggling with this thing for some time unfortunately... Loved this write... you should do it more often. ;)
2nd Mar 2021 8:05am
Beautiful !
"... There's a train leaving town... "
You look like a railway engineer during a period of technical verses and stanzas.
... 😍👍
I suggest that you read Robert Plant's *Fat Lip* songlyrics:
https://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/robertplant/fatlip.html
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0LRZj787dvc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hXSXVQq026s
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"... There's a train leaving town... "
You look like a railway engineer during a period of technical verses and stanzas.
... 😍👍
I suggest that you read Robert Plant's *Fat Lip* songlyrics:
https://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/robertplant/fatlip.html
... ...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0LRZj787dvc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hXSXVQq026s
... ... ...
30th Nov 2021 11:49pm
Beautiful !... Beautiful indeed ...
Beautiful as that train ticket.
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Beautiful as that train ticket.
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Anonymous
- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
29th Dec 2021 4:48pm
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