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The regaling of a very good girl. (+Reading)
I lie in bed
the sounds of silence
fill my head
a pillow flip,
to release
the heated grip
as my fingers dip
into
YOUR
[collared]
pussy's
juicy slit
... three
ebb and flow
soon it
becomes four
pushing
limits
A s t r e t c h
to explore...
Oh God
twice more,
Now it's
time to breathe in
deep
stimulate harder
to attempt
an unknown
feat
head thrown
back
screams
in loud repeat
following
his
remembered
commands
of
a desired kink
while unable
to
withstand
that voice,
in ear
is crystal clear
hammering
and
hammering
-I release a swear
WAveS of plEasuRe
wash away
The last bits of care
mind begins
an unfurl
A need for his
approval—
I'm such
a very good girl
Published 6th Jan 2021
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© Blu2020
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6th Jan 2021 7:29am
Hee hee hee
Yes, very.. indeed
Bad Blue!
💜
Ty for listening, listing and your lovely comment
xo
Yes, very.. indeed
Bad Blue!
💜
Ty for listening, listing and your lovely comment
xo
6th Jan 2021 8:12am
Extremely good, top of your class, hey you got my approval and I had nothing to do with it, it was that good lol
Brilliant, seductive, hell girl that was hot
Love and light
Ron xx
Brilliant, seductive, hell girl that was hot
Love and light
Ron xx
6th Jan 2021 11:09pm
.. lol... Thank you my dear!
Ty for listening and the list add
💜
Glad you like it
xoxo
Ty for listening and the list add
💜
Glad you like it
xoxo
6th Jan 2021 11:57am
6th Jan 2021 11:59am
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Sep 2021 1:45am
6th Jan 2021 1:57pm
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I love the flags! 🇺🇸💜🇬🇧 Why haven't I been using them all along, too?!? Huh... Hee hee hee... Ty for listening to my overnight naughty insomnia! I'm glad you enjoyed it, Wilber... Ty for the RL add, and your genuine and thoughtful comments.
🌹
xo
B
🌹
xo
B
6th Jan 2021 2:51pm
Wow! Love it ! Your rhyme is on point this flowed with ease like butter ! You are an amazing writer
BlueBoo
Love Always
Your sister 😘❤️🤗
Listed 👍🏻
BlueBoo
Love Always
Your sister 😘❤️🤗
Listed 👍🏻
6th Jan 2021 7:45pm
Thank you so much for the list add, my sister!
I'm grateful for your awesome comments and kind kind support. You rock! and I'm smiling wide!
😁😁😁
Love you, lady!!
💞🌹💞🌹💞
-B
I'm grateful for your awesome comments and kind kind support. You rock! and I'm smiling wide!
😁😁😁
Love you, lady!!
💞🌹💞🌹💞
-B
6th Jan 2021 3:38pm
The "good" kind of good girl. Luv the use of imagination and remembrance to have him there.
Tough to define good unless one is aware of the contrast of naughty! : )
Tough to define good unless one is aware of the contrast of naughty! : )
Thank you!
The remembrance was the whole point..
well done you.
I'm so very appreciative of the listen and your thoughtful comments!,
( and mortified at my typos!!)
Please pardon that oversight...
Apologies again
🙏 🌹 💜
xoxo
The remembrance was the whole point..
well done you.
I'm so very appreciative of the listen and your thoughtful comments!,
( and mortified at my typos!!)
Please pardon that oversight...
Apologies again
🙏 🌹 💜
xoxo
6th Jan 2021 10:40pm
BV you are a very good girl at naughty resonating poetry. This stimulating write has me Bound as I contemplate my own experiences in this erotic lifestyle. After reading and listening to this aMMMMMazing submission a half a dozen thrilling times I keep thinking that I want to become an expert in BDSM. But I am still working out all the KINKS, LOL. Poetic Erotic Euphoria!!!!
6th Jan 2021 11:24pm
Thank youuuuuuu
Your comments are truly amazing.
I'm appreciative of the list add and all your support 🌹 💜 🌹
🌈 xo
Your comments are truly amazing.
I'm appreciative of the list add and all your support 🌹 💜 🌹
🌈 xo
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Aug 2023 5:45pm
7th Jan 2021 00:50am
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7th Jan 2021 2:47am
Yowza, Blue!! I love hearing you read and the piece just keeps on building an building. The vid is subtly erotic. A veritable tingle-maker. I think this is clever, "WAveS of plEasuRe" You re a good girl.
7th Jan 2021 2:59am
Hee hee hee hee hee
I AM a very good girl.
Ty for reading, B
I'm smiling from ear to ear
xoxo
💜 💜 💜
I AM a very good girl.
Ty for reading, B
I'm smiling from ear to ear
xoxo
💜 💜 💜
7th Jan 2021 11:13pm
11th Jan 2021 4:09pm
I couldn't but think you might be smiling as you read this...
I really liked the rhymes here and there, it's as if in throes of ecstasy it adds an accent in those lines.
Great stuff Blue.
I really liked the rhymes here and there, it's as if in throes of ecstasy it adds an accent in those lines.
Great stuff Blue.
11th Jan 2021 4:51pm
*smiles*
Thank you for listening Wally. I thoroughly enjoyed recording this one, yes. lol
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate the list add.
Much love,
🌹
xo
Thank you for listening Wally. I thoroughly enjoyed recording this one, yes. lol
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate the list add.
Much love,
🌹
xo
Anonymous
13th Jan 2021 5:25am
It's getting hot in here, I think I'm overdressed! Beautiful reading, Blue :)
13th Jan 2021 5:27am
You flatterer you!! hee hee
Ty very much, Rachel
I'm still learning in the ways of SW, I really appreciate that comment!
💜
xoxo
B
Ty very much, Rachel
I'm still learning in the ways of SW, I really appreciate that comment!
💜
xoxo
B
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
19th Mar 2021 3:55am
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19th Mar 2021 4:03am
I appreciate you listening...
Ty for those extremely thoughtful remarks
🌹
xo
Ty for those extremely thoughtful remarks
🌹
xo
