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persistence is providence ~ tales of varied heartbeats.
(i.)
such a quieted heart
submissive
bound by emotional synergy
a beat is all but echo'd
in lustful refracted energy
(ii.)
passionate in a known
quintessential dyed-in-the-wool
each beat—
truth shouts of i'm shown!
in a loyal and devoted, ~ unspoken new rule
(iii.)
gaining sustenance in the shadows
wandering in a darkness of vigilance
where a clever heart beats
are so mighty and their strongest
when conjoined in all of their unified silence
(iv.)
over time and distance
faithful beating, it steadies in surety
to forge a staunch rhythm
persistence is providence
dressed in a beautiful wry smile of clarity
(v.)
nay to ever question
it's already done
in each beat of my willing
take of these heartstrings
"Uncle"
...... you've won
Author's Note
© Blu2020
hers is a fickle heart.
pic via Pinterest
hers is a fickle heart.
pic via Pinterest
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. persistence is providence ~ tales of varied heartbeats.
5th Jan 2021 10:38pm
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5th Jan 2021 10:40pm
Re. persistence is providence ~ tales of varied heartbeats.
5th Jan 2021 11:23pm
Oh my thats gorgeous, like the poetess who wrote it
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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5th Jan 2021 11:31pm
Thank you for reading and the generous list add, Ron. I'm blushing.... hardly gorgeous...
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5th Jan 2021 11:42pm
My legs don't work, my eyes do
You are very pretty
Love and light
Ron cx
You are very pretty
Love and light
Ron cx
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6th Jan 2021 3:39am
Re. persistence is providence ~ tales of varied heartbeats.
6th Jan 2021 00:20am
Love your style and is quite beautiful to read. Verse 4 was my favourite, very uplifting for sure.
And love the title, the "tales of varied heartbeats" part, make me think of a rush of different emotions
And love the title, the "tales of varied heartbeats" part, make me think of a rush of different emotions
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Kieron,
Thank you for visiting! I'm so glad to see you upon my page tonight... appreciative of your thoughtful comments and the list add, too. It's nice to know that you found something within my words that resonated. ~ Titling poems is kinda my favorite thing... lmao.. I enjoy trying to title poems with something that's perfectly fitting!! I'm a total nerd 🤓... lmao
I'm happy you found your way here... please, don't be a stranger!
Much love,
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xo
-B
Thank you for visiting! I'm so glad to see you upon my page tonight... appreciative of your thoughtful comments and the list add, too. It's nice to know that you found something within my words that resonated. ~ Titling poems is kinda my favorite thing... lmao.. I enjoy trying to title poems with something that's perfectly fitting!! I'm a total nerd 🤓... lmao
I'm happy you found your way here... please, don't be a stranger!
Much love,
🌹
xo
-B
Re: Re. persistence is providence ~ tales of varied heartbeats.
6th Jan 2021 11:19am
I can relate to that, I used to just write titles and then try to structure poems to fit the titles. I don't do that any more but I have a leftover list of titles lol...anyway I look forward to reading more of your work and not just the titles!
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Re. persistence is providence ~ tales of varied heartbeats.
6th Jan 2021 00:26am
Re: Re. persistence is providence ~ tales of varied heartbeats.
6th Jan 2021 4:32am
Aww, Stoney.... Thank you so much for reading and your lovely visit. It's always a pleasure, my dear friend. 🙏
Much love and returned respect,
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xoxo
B
Much love and returned respect,
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xoxo
B
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6th Jan 2021 10:03am
Re. persistence is providence ~ tales of varied heartbeats.
6th Jan 2021 1:07am
BV, you don't miss a ''Beat'' with this incredibly beautiful poem. You always seem to have your finger on the ''Pulse'' of your emotional self with your poetic genius. It is almost criminal how talented you are and I place you under ''Cardiac'' arrest because Lord knows the heart skips a beat with each verse you spill.............Extraordinary!!!
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6th Jan 2021 4:58am
Your comments are your true poetry, FF.!!! 👍🏻
Damn you are soooo good. Thank you very much for reading, the list add and your absolutely kick ass (that's right, I said kick ass!) comments, that make me smile and giggle with a sense of self confidence and appreciation.
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I'm deeply grateful. 🙏
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-Blue
Damn you are soooo good. Thank you very much for reading, the list add and your absolutely kick ass (that's right, I said kick ass!) comments, that make me smile and giggle with a sense of self confidence and appreciation.
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I'm deeply grateful. 🙏
xoxo
-Blue
Re. persistence is providence ~ tales of varied heartbeats.
6th Jan 2021 5:04am
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6th Jan 2021 5:21am
Ty so much for reading and listing
I'm deeply grateful for your comments 🌹
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xoxo
Blue
I'm deeply grateful for your comments 🌹
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xoxo
Blue
Re. persistence is providence ~ tales of varied heartbeats.
7th Jan 2021 7:34pm
I love the sensual rendered into the psychological and emotional facets, which are far more potent and vivid, terrific sensitivity in your unfolding. Emphasis, flow, a feeling of harmony throughout, that lends it terrific proportion. 💖🙏
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7th Jan 2021 7:52pm
The (lovely lovely) erudition in your comment leaving, is super swoon worthy...Just fyi... ;)... Thank you very much, Daniel. It's a comment to curl up and cuddle with. I appreciate the list add and you taking your time to visit and brighten my day.
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-S
Re. persistence is providence ~ tales of varied heartbeats.
7th Jan 2021 11:04pm
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8th Jan 2021 2:17am