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Whispers
Tracing words on the
fabric of my being
your soft whispers
tickle my amorous dreams
Carving sensations of desire
Lighting up carnal fire
Your husky voice, stroking gently
my primal cravings.
"Baby, I want you bad", is all I want you whispering...
fabric of my being
your soft whispers
tickle my amorous dreams
Carving sensations of desire
Lighting up carnal fire
Your husky voice, stroking gently
my primal cravings.
"Baby, I want you bad", is all I want you whispering...
Written by
InDreamz
Published 3rd Jan 2021
Author's Note
Another of my old writes
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Whispers
3rd Jan 2021 4:33pm
I love your reading voice, Rohini! You put such emotion into the words and it emanates.
Well done!
Well done!
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5th Jan 2021 4:39pm
Oh, it's such a great compliment for me. I'm so flattered by receiving such wonderful review by you. Thanks much for your kind support, dear Ahavati 😊🌷
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3rd Jan 2021 6:16pm
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4th Jan 2021 11:37am
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5th Jan 2021 4:42pm
I'm so happy you liked this piece. Thank you so much for the RL add, dear DC😊
Re. Whispers
4th Jan 2021 12:13pm
I'm just gonna put this out there you are one very deep woman you remind me of Wise Conscious both of your are on the same level of expression on an intellectual subconscious level of awakening respect dear poetess 🙏🙅
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Wow, such beautiful n high thoughts about me. I'm so touched. Thanks a lot, dear Stoney. It's a matter of honor to be thought highly of by someone like you, who himself is on a high plane of Consciousness 🌹
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5th Jan 2021 4:47pm
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6th Jan 2021 5:29pm
Would be a complete fool to not grant your request. Very erotic romantic piece.
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6th Feb 2021 3:17pm
Great read the perfect voice for erotic poetry brilliant, Great write
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. Whispers
6th Feb 2021 8:06pm
Wow! I'm on seventh heaven after reading your review. Thanks a bunch, dear Ron!!!
I'm so honoured by the RL add. Thanks 😊🌹
I'm so honoured by the RL add. Thanks 😊🌹
Re. Whispers
11th Mar 2021 7:02pm
Very sensual and romantic writing accompanied by an absolutely perfect reading. I really loved this.
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11th Mar 2021 7:50pm
Thank you graciously for your encouraging words, dear poetess. I'm so honoured by the RL add. Much thanks 😊🌹
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6th Apr 2021 12:30pm
That was sensual and so profound. Your voice will resonate in my ear for sometime now.
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1st Jun 2021 8:23pm
Thank you so much for gracing my page with your lovely n kind comments.
I'm truly honoured by the RL add, dear poetess. Much thanks 😊
I'm truly honoured by the RL add, dear poetess. Much thanks 😊
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17th Jun 2021 10:43am
Re. Whispers
"GULP!"
Well, Dear Lady-Poet 🥀
You've not only the pen and vivid imagination of a wondrously sultry woman, you've the smoothly alluring voice of a gently alluring seductress, who not only knows what she wants and feels, but exactly how to effectively express it through the amazing artistry of poetry.
Your title invokes a seductive atmosphere, your perfectly rendered and displayed poem and beautifully loin-warming voice brings it scintillatingly to life, and the skill from your pen sends the irresistible essence glowing from the invitation in your final line through my mind ⁓ like warm succulent silk.
Thank you, Dear Poetess, for sharing one of (if not the) most enthrallingly rousing poems I've enjoyed in a verrry lonnng time! ⁓ Richard 🍃
Well, Dear Lady-Poet 🥀
You've not only the pen and vivid imagination of a wondrously sultry woman, you've the smoothly alluring voice of a gently alluring seductress, who not only knows what she wants and feels, but exactly how to effectively express it through the amazing artistry of poetry.
Your title invokes a seductive atmosphere, your perfectly rendered and displayed poem and beautifully loin-warming voice brings it scintillatingly to life, and the skill from your pen sends the irresistible essence glowing from the invitation in your final line through my mind ⁓ like warm succulent silk.
Thank you, Dear Poetess, for sharing one of (if not the) most enthrallingly rousing poems I've enjoyed in a verrry lonnng time! ⁓ Richard 🍃
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29th Jun 2021 11:35am
I'm left speechless by such a detailed positive review and equally mesmerized by heart warming words of adulation...
Thank you.... Thank you so much, dear Richard for taking your time to write such thoughtful comment... Appreciate it from the bottom of my heart. 😊🌹🌹
Thank you.... Thank you so much, dear Richard for taking your time to write such thoughtful comment... Appreciate it from the bottom of my heart. 😊🌹🌹
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29th Jun 2021 5:25pm
The source of my adoring words,
Lives in the soul-depth heart of You 🌾
It is I who thank Thee, ever-so warmly ⁓🍃
Lives in the soul-depth heart of You 🌾
It is I who thank Thee, ever-so warmly ⁓🍃
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29th Jun 2021 8:22pm
Re. Whispers
2nd Feb 2022 8:24pm
A sweet and bold expression. I wrote few things with same intensity but shy to publish. You are an inspiration
Hugs
KS
Hugs
KS
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