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Re. Senryu - Spells
31st Dec 2020 4:48am
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31st Dec 2020 6:38pm
Magic smiles are the best and when under their spell I am my best😉 Thank you Blue for a comment that magically made me smile.🙏
Re. Senryu - Spells
31st Dec 2020 9:45am
Re: Re. Senryu - Spells
31st Dec 2020 6:41pm
Tgank yiu so much for yiur kind words, Faith. Well if it's perfection I have no where to grow 😄 I am glad that to you it's perfect😍
Re. Senryu - Spells
31st Dec 2020 4:55pm
Wonderful play on words GW I love you bro❤️
Jackie xoxox
Ps The cell phone Poem still my favorite of all time!
Hugs 🤗
Jackie xoxox
Ps The cell phone Poem still my favorite of all time!
Hugs 🤗
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Re: Re. Senryu - Spells
31st Dec 2020 6:44pm
Thank you Jackie❣❣ I feed on your enthusiasm. I need to get back to humor. I had tons 'o' fun writing the cell phone piece. I am honored that it still makes you smile🙏💖
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Yes it’s prolly the best poem I’ve read in years!
Plus it’s hilarious! You are so special to me and we have a longggggg history of friendship sweetheart!
I for one am grateful❤️
Love you deeply my dear brother always
Happy New year!
Jackie xoxoxox🤗❤️🤗❤️🤗❤️
Plus it’s hilarious! You are so special to me and we have a longggggg history of friendship sweetheart!
I for one am grateful❤️
Love you deeply my dear brother always
Happy New year!
Jackie xoxoxox🤗❤️🤗❤️🤗❤️
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Re: Re. Senryu - Spells
1st Jan 2021 4:51pm
Re. Senryu - Spells
2nd Jan 2021 1:14am
Beautiful words and sentiment GW, love it. Have I read the cell phone one? I have to find that.... 🤗
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Re: Re. Senryu - Spells
2nd Jan 2021 5:15am
Thank you, Kristina❣❣ I M super pleased that you like this shorty. I'll send links to my cell phone ouvre 😘
Re. Senryu - Spells
10th Jan 2021 1:49am
Knock, knock fella...🙂 Here’s a postcard.
I probably took something a little different from this. I feel ‘alakazam’ is the more exotic phrase, echoing the smiles, while ‘abracadabra’ merely gets kind words. Married together with the final strophe of “now work your magic” is where it gets interesting, because it shows that all paths lead to the same place. And maybe this applies to many different scenarios in life, though with this being in the love category I have a vague idea of the theme.
It was an interesting little piece to unpack, this one. Thank you for sharing.
I probably took something a little different from this. I feel ‘alakazam’ is the more exotic phrase, echoing the smiles, while ‘abracadabra’ merely gets kind words. Married together with the final strophe of “now work your magic” is where it gets interesting, because it shows that all paths lead to the same place. And maybe this applies to many different scenarios in life, though with this being in the love category I have a vague idea of the theme.
It was an interesting little piece to unpack, this one. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: Re. Senryu - Spells
10th Jan 2021 2:09am
I am ecstatic to read your comment. NS❣ Because it means the spell worked and you're back😁 Thank you so much for my friend.🙏🌹
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10th Jan 2021 7:42pm
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10th Jan 2021 7:51pm
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10th Jan 2021 7:54pm