deepundergroundpoetry.com
Falling Fast
Fraught with love
As though it was
More than just a gamble
Perhaps much like a wicked game
I fear I'm falling fast
Pure madness surrounds me
But I will survive
Perhaps even thrive
Succumbing to
His wiles
As though it was
More than just a gamble
Perhaps much like a wicked game
I fear I'm falling fast
Pure madness surrounds me
But I will survive
Perhaps even thrive
Succumbing to
His wiles
Published 30th Dec 2020
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 6
reading list entries 3
comments 6
reads 589
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
30th Dec 2020 12:07pm
......a cunning write of the chicanery of love. A beautifully written emotional quest for love!. Striking Poetry!
30th Dec 2020 12:08pm
30th Dec 2020 1:42pm
Nicely composed dear poetess for it is that love we seek the most deepest in our lives but regardless still protect your heart and subconsciousness of your mind for the greatest thing the devil has done is make you believe that he doesn't exist even in human skin 🤔
30th Dec 2020 4:35pm
Dear FM,
I’ve learned the heart has a mind if its own no matter how hard the attempt to keep in check. I think your write expressly underscores that notion.
“ Pure madness surrounds me
But I will survive” as may be. But it takes a good long time to get to that vista and I really appreciate your insight to the excitement of new love. Great write. H🌷
I’ve learned the heart has a mind if its own no matter how hard the attempt to keep in check. I think your write expressly underscores that notion.
“ Pure madness surrounds me
But I will survive” as may be. But it takes a good long time to get to that vista and I really appreciate your insight to the excitement of new love. Great write. H🌷
30th Dec 2020 7:44pm
26th Jan 2021 1:17am
Lovely. Best of luck and hope it’s a soft landing.
Careful with us guy wiles! ; )
Careful with us guy wiles! ; )
