I love comments

no flowers
but will throw  a like

Why thank you aspergerpoet56

She has honesty that burns, tight

Thank you

My ego loves the shallow end of the pool.

Just remember instead of drowning just stand up

I appreciate your point of view. Dizzzzzzy. If I read a poet's write and am not particularly impressed, then I will usually give them a like either way, if for nothing merely more as an acklowlegement  to their endeaver and for the fact that I took the time to read what they had to say. If I like what they have to say, I will leave them a comment

Nice but without constructive criticism then how do they get better?

I just wrote you one little girirl

So excited!!! Must go read:)

So excited!!! Must go read:)

So excited!!! Must go read:)

Millions of cockroaches in the world, all posing as people.That don't make those rich bitches special

I like the ”flowers/tomatoes” idea, that's an amusing image. May I ask why you put ”u” and ”ur” instead of ”you” and ”you’re”? It makes the poem look poorly written, in my opinion.

Also, I think that the purpose of a poem should be to use language in a visually/mentally pleasing way, and apart from the last couple of lines, there’s nothing in the way of poetry here. The piece would honestly look better as a poem if it were just those last two lines.

I'd recommend focusing more on images and metaphors that convey your opinion without you just stating them, again like those last two lines, which use physical objects (flowers and tomatoes) and the idea of them being thrown at a person, therefore making a picture in the reader’s head.

Thank you very much :)
And the curtains close

To me all posted here is art of one classification or another and to be celebrated ... I read, I like ... If I comment it is real whatever I say, even just bless and love ... Which to those uninitiated can mean volumes of different things, if not always up to explaining ... Besides like poetry it's always up to interpretation ... Typing is something that hurts even tapping this fanned screen at moment ... But support is painless ... Bless and love ... ..

Hey FeNyX, I apologize for giving you a hard time about this.

Fake commentary is but invisible salt on the wound. I agree with you 100%

Been taking it slow.

Been taking it slow.