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lone.
a
fragile
hypocritical
soul
where loneliness grows
like a weed ~ neglected
yet in a persistent ire
standing strong in passage
willfully against
all of the elements
it's audacity remains—
thrives
especially
in such perfect conditions
when even the sun bows
...O' how lonely does bloom...
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Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 00:00am
Re: Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 1:10am
You are so correct... but are they happy in their sole existence...?.... to exist or to LIVE...
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I love your comments so, Ty, A
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B
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I love your comments so, Ty, A
xoxo
B
Re: Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 1:13am
Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 00:10am
weed.... I wonder does it care what us humans name it such.
For it is but nature. Blooming against all odds.
Some expression BV.
For it is but nature. Blooming against all odds.
Some expression BV.
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Re: Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 1:14am
It hasn't need nor care for humans (kinda like me @ times)... That's why it's "fuck you!, I'm growing where I want" mentality is so vast...You ONLY dandelions growing like that, because they don't give any fucks at all.....Ty for reading and sharing. It's extremely lovely to read your comments...
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B
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B
Re: Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 10:24am
The image on top, I had the same in mind when I inked this
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/299834-a-giant-middle-finger/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/299834-a-giant-middle-finger/
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Re: Re. lone.
19th Dec 2020 1:56am
Wow... powerful spill...
AT 's comments on your poem, are spot on.... Humans and our sheer audacity when dealing with mother nature.... Thank you for sharing and you're right, my pic reminds me of your poem, too...
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AT 's comments on your poem, are spot on.... Humans and our sheer audacity when dealing with mother nature.... Thank you for sharing and you're right, my pic reminds me of your poem, too...
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Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 00:12am
I suspect that the hardiest parts of us take the lashings so the softest parts stay soft. Perhaps we may even be seen by some as an irritating weed that won't go away. But that stubborn defilement is what keeps us grounded and standing tall. I love this piece very much. It spoke to me. Thank you for sharing it.
I hope that the lonely comes and goes, and has not taken up residence <3
I hope that the lonely comes and goes, and has not taken up residence <3
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Re: Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 1:06am
Your comments and thoughtfulness are a joy to read, Eerie. I try all the time to avoid doubling down on my very admitted stubborn streak, now refreshingly realizing that at times it's like my own 'woobie' (I called mine that too, took it from the movie Mr Mom) and not the complete annoyance to all others and at times myself, that I perceive it to be... (although others probably disagree) .. lol...
I'm appreciative of the list add and so very happy you found something within my words that resonated.... I'm humbled.....
Much love and respect,
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B
I'm appreciative of the list add and so very happy you found something within my words that resonated.... I'm humbled.....
Much love and respect,
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xo
B
Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 1:22am
BV what a beautiful vulnerable interpretation of the delicate soul. Your clever simile of the fragile soul being like a growing weed is the perfect characterization of how the soul is constantly searching to bloom/grow with undeniable fortitude. This can be a blessing and a curse. I resonate with the curse because I interpret that this amazing poignant poem highlights how to be strong ''alone'', and I think that is sad....... Now, how did you capture that photo of my soul standing alone in your pavers outside of your house??? LOL ..... who needs Dr. Phil when all I need is a dose Bluevelvete elixir, LMAO
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Re: Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 1:53am
lol... You look much different in this picture then what I expected!... lol... Your comments always highlight my impetus so easily, I wonder if I need to be more mysterious.. Hmmm... 🤔.... 😂......
Ty for sharing your thoughts and feelings, it's always such a pleasure. I'm grateful for your RL add and all the cherished visits...
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B
Ty for sharing your thoughts and feelings, it's always such a pleasure. I'm grateful for your RL add and all the cherished visits...
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xoxo
B
Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 1:23am
A weed is a rose by another name everything has it's own beauty and a job to do in this world
Standing alone doesn't make the weed weak it proves it needs no one else to survive. A weed is strong
Ron x
Standing alone doesn't make the weed weak it proves it needs no one else to survive. A weed is strong
Ron x
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Re: Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 1:32am
As are you.... my lovely friend!
Ty for reading and your AWESOME comments
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You're a pillar of strength in my eyes
Ty for the RL add too
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B
Ty for reading and your AWESOME comments
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You're a pillar of strength in my eyes
Ty for the RL add too
xoxo
B
Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 1:53am
Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 3:35am
Re: Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 2:46pm
Ty, Grace... strength despite all thrown at you...
I know you know
Much love,
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I know you know
Much love,
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xo
Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 4:03am
Miss blue💐🌹 🌻This poem blooms... starts out small and unsuspecting... immediately growing into a beautiful short story of pain and longing... yet solitude brings a courage and grace that will always stand gorgeous and strong... no matter what the garden it grows in... or who's weeding it... you stand out with an admirable and elegant difference... I so love different... but I'm also very familiar and empathize with the solitude or isolation that so often accompanies a distinct essence... 🌻🌻🌹🌻🌻
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Your ability to dig into my spills.....Eli, it's just so heartening. I am lucky to have made such a gorgeous friend who can burrow into me and my sappy sadness (yes yes...I know, self depreciation isn't flattering, yet it's my go to!) with accuracy that makes me smile. The plight of something apparently so very weak and incognito in it's immense ability to overcome.... is my wish for myself... In reality, I'm more marshmallow than dandelion. I take your thoughts and beautifully written feedback and bask in them today.....
Ty for reading, the list add and all your kindness..
Again, I'm truly a lucky Blue
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B
Ty for reading, the list add and all your kindness..
Again, I'm truly a lucky Blue
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xo
B
Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 7:31am
Cheers to those of us on the fringes peeking in blue
A wonderful lil spill here
A wonderful lil spill here
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Re: Re. lone.
Ohh Swagger.... love your visits...You know what your peeks do to this Blue! ..;) Ty for your insights and I'm ear to ear smiles you enjoyed.
appreciate the RL add, too
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B
appreciate the RL add, too
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xo
B
Re: Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 3:22pm
Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 9:04am
Dear BV,
I’ve always thought it was a shame dandelions are a weed. They’re so cheerful against the backdrop of a lawn. Alas, they’re steadfast no matter how many times the attempt to eradicate them. Lonely? Maybe. I’m inclined to think after years of trying to play nice, fit in, maintain relationships, being alone has its rewards. An unfortunate revelation to me was being lonely in a crowd of friends. A very thoughtful piece. H🌷
I’ve always thought it was a shame dandelions are a weed. They’re so cheerful against the backdrop of a lawn. Alas, they’re steadfast no matter how many times the attempt to eradicate them. Lonely? Maybe. I’m inclined to think after years of trying to play nice, fit in, maintain relationships, being alone has its rewards. An unfortunate revelation to me was being lonely in a crowd of friends. A very thoughtful piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 3:34pm
Ohhh H,
You do hit the nail on the head with that last sentiment, too. Is it even more of a crush to your soul /psyche when you're surrounded by people and yet you're left feeling like you're standing on the surface of the moon???! I can relate to that, as well... 100% That's why, when you DO find someone that whittles their way "in" with a like feeling or supreme connection that erases or alleviates that "lonely in the crowd" feeling, it's so rare and intoxicating and a MUST to hold onto! .... A hope, that everyone gets to experience. Ty so much for reading, sharing, and the list add... your insights are truly inspiring to read.....
Always
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You do hit the nail on the head with that last sentiment, too. Is it even more of a crush to your soul /psyche when you're surrounded by people and yet you're left feeling like you're standing on the surface of the moon???! I can relate to that, as well... 100% That's why, when you DO find someone that whittles their way "in" with a like feeling or supreme connection that erases or alleviates that "lonely in the crowd" feeling, it's so rare and intoxicating and a MUST to hold onto! .... A hope, that everyone gets to experience. Ty so much for reading, sharing, and the list add... your insights are truly inspiring to read.....
Always
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Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 1:31pm
Wow ... love this one ... first the layout ... it has an organic shape to it ... then the short crisp lines ... great flow ... also the sparing use of boldface type ... excellent right my dear poetess ...
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Re: Re. lone.
17th Dec 2020 3:21pm
You're lovely comments and generous list add have made my morning... Ty LilD,
I'm grateful!
I also love that info about soon to be not so little Jade!... lol... I figured she was German Shepherd... her paws alone, indicate that she's going to be a big girl! GS are such smart and loyal breeds...loving too. She'll be a wonderful companion and a truest doggo bff! 🐶
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I'm grateful!
I also love that info about soon to be not so little Jade!... lol... I figured she was German Shepherd... her paws alone, indicate that she's going to be a big girl! GS are such smart and loyal breeds...loving too. She'll be a wonderful companion and a truest doggo bff! 🐶
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Re. lone.
Wow lonely does bloom what a magnificent and clever way to express that word! I totally love your pen thank you for sharing Blue
Loves you
Jackie 🤗❤️
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Loves you
Jackie 🤗❤️
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Re: Re. lone.
18th Dec 2020 3:15am
It's just so awesome seeing you on my page tonight, Jackie! I missed your beautiful presence and I'm very glad to see you. Ty for reading and your lovely comments.. I appreciate the list add!
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Re: Re. lone.
18th Dec 2020 6:43am
Thank you for reading and the list add....
You're interpretation is one, that crossed my mind while writing, about your friend....I thought of not prospering in spite of, but just being in the constant state loneliness and how that would affect... like you said, shell of a man...
I'm glad it resonated —
I appreciate your thoughts and comments
Welcome to DUP and I hope you enjoy your time here.
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xoxo
B
You're interpretation is one, that crossed my mind while writing, about your friend....I thought of not prospering in spite of, but just being in the constant state loneliness and how that would affect... like you said, shell of a man...
I'm glad it resonated —
I appreciate your thoughts and comments
Welcome to DUP and I hope you enjoy your time here.
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xoxo
B
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Re: Re. lone.
7th Feb 2021 5:39am
Ty for reading Danny
I am floored you're taking the time to read these older pieces. I'm extremely grateful and all smiles that you are enjoying yourself. I really am so very appreciative ;)
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xo
I am floored you're taking the time to read these older pieces. I'm extremely grateful and all smiles that you are enjoying yourself. I really am so very appreciative ;)
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xo