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Hollow Openings
He searched her pockets
and found his soul,
he searched her soul
and found nothing,
which happened to be
more than he expected.
and found his soul,
he searched her soul
and found nothing,
which happened to be
more than he expected.
Published 12th Dec 2020
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12th Dec 2020 7:02pm
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12th Dec 2020 8:14pm
de·void (adjective) entirely lacking or free from.
Ok. So one would need a compass, map or a guide ... ok ... Bless and love ... ..
Ok. So one would need a compass, map or a guide ... ok ... Bless and love ... ..
12th Dec 2020 7:04pm
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13th Dec 2020 1:22pm
Thank you Dan,
Never forget you're my inspiration for photos. I love your abstract ways of seeing life through a lens.
Never forget you're my inspiration for photos. I love your abstract ways of seeing life through a lens.
Dear N,
Honestly, your wit and observations are beyond fantastic!
I stifled a laugh at “ he searched her soul
and found nothing,
which happened to be
more than he expected.” Because of its unexpected truth. You have a comedic’s timing with a poets soul. Where? Where is this elusive land of security, contentedness, love...another slam dunk write.
H🌷
Honestly, your wit and observations are beyond fantastic!
I stifled a laugh at “ he searched her soul
and found nothing,
which happened to be
more than he expected.” Because of its unexpected truth. You have a comedic’s timing with a poets soul. Where? Where is this elusive land of security, contentedness, love...another slam dunk write.
H🌷
13th Dec 2020 1:24pm
14th Dec 2020 7:16pm
I always love your mysterious pieces when it comes to anxiety and in finding oneself even before others try to find you.
16th Dec 2020 00:55am
