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Hypothetical Love?
i nearly came.....
a minute thought in
dream
&
real life.
i nearly came .....
thoughts slippery
knowing
NO WAY back then
no way
now.
You said You missed "us"
i felt that
i miss "US"
as well...........................
i know we share a LOVE that's not an earthly love.
Yet, we miss one another in earthly DEFINITIONS!!
Damn and eff me!!
Neither damned nor committed,
ours.....
our Love for one another will
ever be eternal.
still miss You every now and then -
especially when You enter my sleep.
damn.....!!
a minute thought in
dream
&
real life.
i nearly came .....
thoughts slippery
knowing
NO WAY back then
no way
now.
You said You missed "us"
i felt that
i miss "US"
as well...........................
i know we share a LOVE that's not an earthly love.
Yet, we miss one another in earthly DEFINITIONS!!
Damn and eff me!!
Neither damned nor committed,
ours.....
our Love for one another will
ever be eternal.
still miss You every now and then -
especially when You enter my sleep.
damn.....!!
Published 11th Dec 2020
Author's Note
not anyone in DUP --------------
many in my recent past text, PM, call and send me cards and notes............
many in my recent past text, PM, call and send me cards and notes............
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11th Dec 2020 8:13pm
12th Dec 2020 7:19pm
Anonymous
- Edited 17th Apr 2021 8:45pm
12th Dec 2020 2:25am
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12th Dec 2020 7:19pm
12th Dec 2020 4:59am
Dear T,
Such a feeling of “almost” throughout this write. For me the regret of not following through on something that was important at the time and I held back from the fear of the outcome- well it was nice to know I had support and love from a few special people who cared. I think your poem pays that homage lovingly. H🌷
Such a feeling of “almost” throughout this write. For me the regret of not following through on something that was important at the time and I held back from the fear of the outcome- well it was nice to know I had support and love from a few special people who cared. I think your poem pays that homage lovingly. H🌷
12th Dec 2020 7:25pm
My feelings here,
convey'd from a dream (are dreams really gateways to truth?)
where me and my best (Female) Friend are at a Ballet where i invited here to attend and i buffed out with the best tickets for the best viewing because she told me this was the 1st Ballet she'd ever been invited to see (on a date).
NO WAY, me and her could be (i am 20 yrs older)
But her Heart and Spirit is waaaay Older than mine and i believe why our solid friendship grows and we continue to BE............
It is here where i had to share this oddity and odd Feel as i know many might benefit (she said it is OK)
i thank You for Your indepth response
convey'd from a dream (are dreams really gateways to truth?)
where me and my best (Female) Friend are at a Ballet where i invited here to attend and i buffed out with the best tickets for the best viewing because she told me this was the 1st Ballet she'd ever been invited to see (on a date).
NO WAY, me and her could be (i am 20 yrs older)
But her Heart and Spirit is waaaay Older than mine and i believe why our solid friendship grows and we continue to BE............
It is here where i had to share this oddity and odd Feel as i know many might benefit (she said it is OK)
i thank You for Your indepth response
18th Dec 2020 6:06pm
Not looking for poetry appraisal
only emotion convey-al
and so,
and thus,
appreciate
as much
Your read and opinion.
thank you
Honored for the RL add
only emotion convey-al
and so,
and thus,
appreciate
as much
Your read and opinion.
thank you
Honored for the RL add
1st Jan 2021 6:51pm
I really get the feeling of strong admiration and desire. Followed by that nagging feeling that something precious is absent but over time it moves more from the conscious to the subconscious and emerges in dreams. Really beautifully written, I enjoyed it a lot and glad I discovered your writing. I look forward to reading more. Happy New Year, Kristina.
2nd Jan 2021 3:40pm
1st Mar 2021 11:17pm
2nd Mar 2021 12:29pm
Go for it!!
i often try out new structures and methods if only just to shake things up a wee bit to get me out of rut.
appreciate the read
i often try out new structures and methods if only just to shake things up a wee bit to get me out of rut.
appreciate the read
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Apr 2021 11:45am
3rd Mar 2021 3:59am
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3rd Mar 2021 3:46pm
thank You for causing me to smile this morning!!
Hmmm, 'hippothetical' You say? i might have to adopt that word.
Hmmm, 'hippothetical' You say? i might have to adopt that word.
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Apr 2021 11:45am
3rd Mar 2021 7:13pm
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3rd Mar 2021 10:44pm
I enjoyed reading this while just picturing this person professing love to someone who can't hear or see them.
4th Mar 2021 4:22pm
i've know (felt - as i am an empath) for a while that she initially was infatuated with me.
i accepted her friendship and growth and inner every-things while not accepting any sexual interludes.
Today i am her ever close friend and counselor.
We live in different states and i believe that's a good thing.
Appreciate Your read and share
i accepted her friendship and growth and inner every-things while not accepting any sexual interludes.
Today i am her ever close friend and counselor.
We live in different states and i believe that's a good thing.
Appreciate Your read and share
