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O, Big ship Down. (Downer Than Ever There Ever Was)

 
 
Eye could sorry mys
                          elf   for
a left'hand  hook landing just right,
 
but waited too long
         waited too long
             waited too long
before the night-watch alit in
their predesignated place,(spot-on, btw),
Aye needing that peculiar lightbulb aye needed
        needing to neutralize the patches of
     Dark left undone by the previous shift.
 
Must not ignore the personal ignorance that
    that brought me here at the beginning.
 
Am, thus, lugging about a shitload of flotsam y jetsam that
       I damn well better jettison, whether it be for morbid
              floats of whatever dopey junk I thought would
come-in-handy in the bloody afterlife, that I been messing with
and  planning since The Before Life ever raised it's cute and  
                                          nifty head.
 
Yes. A head, cute'n'nifty Head was all we'd ever need to secure
    a spot in Purgatory,  
                          (what better place to p'urge?),
                                                        knowing that the child-care there
                                                                                               is most eXcellent,
                                                                                               (4.5 stars).
                             Valet parking free for all us blessed mo'fuckrs.
And the band will
play on and on as the big, bad'ass ship goes down, down, more down
                                                                        than anyone could'a'magined
 
 
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Written by dkzksaxxas_DanielX (DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)
Published | Edited 23rd Dec 2020
Author's Note
"They wouldn't let Jack Johnson on board. They said 'This ship don't haul no coal'. Fare thee well Titanic. Fare thee well." ---- Song of the Titanic
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