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Invisible nouse
Emotions chocking me like a nouse around my neck.
Scrambled thoughts drowning me like a mental shipwreck.
Scrambled thoughts drowning me like a mental shipwreck.
Published 29th Nov 2020
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Anonymous
30th Nov 2020 4:35pm
Ahhhhhhhhhhh, emotions and scrambled thoughts are the things that handcuff me every day from waking to sleep. Short, sweet and to the point. Intense.
2nd Dec 2020 6:23am
Brava TL❣❣ Your visceral image of emotions choking like a noose is to me so identifiable...I felt that definite constriction by my emotions and my thoughts are forever scrambled...never over-easy 😍
