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A Man of Simple Dreams
( After Lord Byron )
To wake of morning, half-light crowning—
spitting flash through arthritic trees;
a spindly flame, waxing stronger
exposing ivory skin of frosted field.
An aroma, roasted kernel twists
as cats, entwined amid feet;
timorous stems of shadow retreat
across leaf-strewn concrete.
To hear the yodel of migrating loon
depart winter-tide for passion
disrupts me not, despite their omen;
armed guards of snow, capturing
the garden, sparing no green survivor
save evergreens, their boughs adorned—
pearls before swine; Venus Fly-
trapped, awaiting inevitable thaw. . .
aftertastes of solitude, escaping
ivory towers o're time's terra firma—
until such, I shall in patience remain
a man of simple dreams.
~
For J-with love
To wake of morning, half-light crowning—
spitting flash through arthritic trees;
a spindly flame, waxing stronger
exposing ivory skin of frosted field.
An aroma, roasted kernel twists
as cats, entwined amid feet;
timorous stems of shadow retreat
across leaf-strewn concrete.
To hear the yodel of migrating loon
depart winter-tide for passion
disrupts me not, despite their omen;
armed guards of snow, capturing
the garden, sparing no green survivor
save evergreens, their boughs adorned—
pearls before swine; Venus Fly-
trapped, awaiting inevitable thaw. . .
aftertastes of solitude, escaping
ivory towers o're time's terra firma—
until such, I shall in patience remain
a man of simple dreams.
~
For J-with love
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 10th Nov 2020
Author's Note
For the CCC Lord Byron tribute: She Walks in Beauty https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11643/
Inspirational poem - Solitude: http://www.online-literature.com/byron/696/
Inspirational poem - Solitude: http://www.online-literature.com/byron/696/
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Re. A Man of Simple Dreams
10th Nov 2020 00:51am
all I know of byron was that he was all for ones liberties, and f*#k he took some
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19th Nov 2020 1:02am
Re. A Man of Simple Dreams
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Nov 2020 1:17am
10th Nov 2020 00:58am
I love the inspiration poem you chose, and I Love this even more.
And it feels so surreal, as it was only today that I was working on a poem titled, "A Man of Small Dreams" ....
What a joy it would be to wake up every morning to the Nature snoring, listen to her heart beating throughout the day, and drift of to sleep amidst a recital of fireflies and stars.
The ultimate Solitude.
"An aroma, roasted kernel twists
as cats, entwined amid feet;"
What a smile that brings to my heart.
This is such a gift that I feel as though it was just my birthday. ❤📝😌 Thank you. 💜
And it feels so surreal, as it was only today that I was working on a poem titled, "A Man of Small Dreams" ....
What a joy it would be to wake up every morning to the Nature snoring, listen to her heart beating throughout the day, and drift of to sleep amidst a recital of fireflies and stars.
The ultimate Solitude.
"An aroma, roasted kernel twists
as cats, entwined amid feet;"
What a smile that brings to my heart.
This is such a gift that I feel as though it was just my birthday. ❤📝😌 Thank you. 💜
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19th Nov 2020 1:03am
Re. A Man of Simple Dreams
10th Nov 2020 1:21am
I really loved this, Ahavati! It's so beautifully crafted - truly, incredible writing :)
I enjoyed the wonderful imagery you conveyed with your words here. You did a great job
I am off to read your inspiration poem now <3
I enjoyed the wonderful imagery you conveyed with your words here. You did a great job
I am off to read your inspiration poem now <3
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19th Nov 2020 1:03am
Re. A Man of Simple Dreams
10th Nov 2020 1:58am
Excellent, Ahvanti. You have captured the spirit perfectly.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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19th Nov 2020 1:04am
Re. A Man of Simple Dreams
10th Nov 2020 2:48am
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19th Nov 2020 1:04am
Re. A Man of Simple Dreams
10th Nov 2020 4:23am
Omg! I don’t remember giving you permission to write about my life ???! Hehe I absolutely love this Ava ❤️ Simply brilliant! Ya know, this is why I love you so much.
Loves ya
Wow!
Jackie 👍🏻🤗❤️
Listed 👍🏻
Loves ya
Wow!
Jackie 👍🏻🤗❤️
Listed 👍🏻
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19th Nov 2020 1:05am
Re. A Man of Simple Dreams
10th Nov 2020 6:02pm
Lord Byron can really paint a splashy scene, but this, with it's softer touch, is just beautiful.
Nominated for POM.
Nominated for POM.
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19th Nov 2020 1:06am
Re. A Man of Simple Dreams
10th Nov 2020 7:46pm
A morning for revelations...new, fresh and hopeful... how can one not feel happy there. (outside crappy jobs mind frame)
stunning vision...I heard and saw all those beautiful things.
stunning vision...I heard and saw all those beautiful things.
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19th Nov 2020 1:07am
Re. A Man of Simple Dreams
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Nov 2020 8:52pm
10th Nov 2020 8:51pm
Long winters and dark nights of the soul have much in common; patience buried underneath blasts and howls of impatience --- notions of Spring tiding us over until the real thing emerges. You poem Nature like no one else we know. Even Byron can't hold a candle to the hearth and soul you put into this. :) xo
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19th Nov 2020 1:07am
Re. A Man of Simple Dreams
11th Nov 2020 6:22am
Dear A,
Can I use this as my entry for the comp instead of the one I’m about to submit?
Gorgeous H🌷
Can I use this as my entry for the comp instead of the one I’m about to submit?
Gorgeous H🌷
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19th Nov 2020 1:08am
Re. A Man of Simple Dreams
11th Nov 2020 9:05am
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19th Nov 2020 1:09am
Re. A Man of Simple Dreams
11th Nov 2020 11:59am
Simple dreams perhaps, but oh so wonderfully written. I absolutely loved it.
John
John
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Re. A Man of Simple Dreams
11th Nov 2020 8:53pm
What a beautiful way to describe the morning sunrise "half-light crowning" and then you take us on a journey of the senses. Truly enjoy the pieces you and JB inspire each other with.
Excellent verse.
Excellent verse.
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19th Nov 2020 1:10am
Re. A Man of Simple Dreams
11th Nov 2020 9:46pm
I think the bohemian Mr. Byron would be delighted in this staggering tribute A...reminded me of why I love my solitude and aloneness...the peaceful song of birds. Bravo my friend!
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
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19th Nov 2020 1:11am
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19th Nov 2020 1:12am
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Anonymous
12th Nov 2020 3:02am
Wow Avahati.........as usual what a beautiful tribute to Mr Bryan........your words truly speak to my heart.......luv this.........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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19th Nov 2020 1:13am
Re. A Man of Simple Dreams
13th Nov 2020 1:33am
Wow, this is so beautiful, eloquent in the way it reads, enchanted like a secret garden..
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19th Nov 2020 1:14am
Re. A Man of Simple Dreams
This is my favourite poem of yours that I've read in a while. The Romantic sense of solitude with nature is profoundly strong. It feels like a fragment of a letter written by a Romantic poet of the era, and I doubt that I can praise it more highly than that.
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20th Dec 2020 9:26pm