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knowing.
how does my heart beat...
you know this
as you hold it within your hands
feeling each beat of it's passionate demands
how do my lips feel...
you know this
as you trace, my face
with your own perfect, ravenous mouth of grace
how do my words heal...
you know this
when you whisper through the air,
repeating my own words back to me,
in your-"only you" penetrating, sultry kind of flare
how does it feel to lay within my arms...
you know this
as your aches of the solitary are eviscerated
by the warmth of my skin so soft;
your mind is obliterated
and other senses are blind;
nothing else exists, except your arms,
wrapped tightly, intertwined in mine
how does my voice sound...
you know this
whenever you're sitting quietly,
you hear me,
you hear my breathy yearning sigh
in your mind's eye;
recalling all our late night conversations,
ones that left us reeling
in synchronicity's revelations
and you
having me repeat your name,
just to hear me say it again and again,
searing my tone and cadence
within the knowing tendrils
of your mind's own brilliance
you know this—
you know
how it feels
to suddenly find...
that your whole world
is now slightly slanted,
off kilter and supplanted
with an overwhelming
sense of just how
connected
two can become
when they both
... just know
Author's Note
A Blue dream...
©Blu2020
©Blu2020
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Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 00:07am
Love this and to really know the answers to all these questions would truly be amazing....but you know this
Love and light. Great job. You got your Mojo back
Ron xxx
Love and light. Great job. You got your Mojo back
Ron xxx
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Re: Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 00:13am
You are so awesome and kind, my lovely friend from across the pond... 💞💕
Thank you for reading and your comment made my night.
Sweet Dreams ✨
🌃 🌙 🌙
💜 💜
xoxo
B
Thank you for reading and your comment made my night.
Sweet Dreams ✨
🌃 🌙 🌙
💜 💜
xoxo
B
Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 00:24am
beautiful Blue no poet writes this fantastic without deep passion to inspire
I love the deep longing lustful undertones in this ❤
I love the deep longing lustful undertones in this ❤
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Re: Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 00:28am
Thank you very much, B
I'm melancholy tonight,
listening to The Cure....
and indeed, feeling deep.
Thank you for the lovely
comments and RL add
I always love seeing your avatar.
💜🌹💜
xo
B
I'm melancholy tonight,
listening to The Cure....
and indeed, feeling deep.
Thank you for the lovely
comments and RL add
I always love seeing your avatar.
💜🌹💜
xo
B
Re: Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 00:41am
I feel your pain lovely one hugs you to me I love seeing you too...I have suffered from feeling disconnected from everyone lately but you're there in my thoughts when I come in 💕
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Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 00:45am
I am enjoying the deep passion in this poem. Love can be great if you find the right person for you. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 00:47am
Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 1:56am
That knowing: something that you can't see, exist. Something that can't be touched, felt. Something that can't be understood, realized. The mystery of a mystery.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 2:11am
You're a dreamy incognito romantic, me thinks, bk
See? It's comments like yours that leave me in ruins.... and breathless, waiting for your return...
Ty, my lovely friend
I'm smiling tonight,
even though my melancholy.
🌹💜🌹
xoxo
💋
B
See? It's comments like yours that leave me in ruins.... and breathless, waiting for your return...
Ty, my lovely friend
I'm smiling tonight,
even though my melancholy.
🌹💜🌹
xoxo
💋
B
Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 5:26am
Ah yes, those first connections...love and lust wrapped in a fiery tango dance where the two burn as one. Just beautiful, Blue.
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
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Re: Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 6:25am
You're far too kind, Harry!
I must love that fiery tango dance...
Your description is spot on on
Ty for reading, I'm always in awe that you're able to find something you like in my little offerings
I'm grateful for the RL add 🙏
I can feel that good Zen Australian vibe!
😉☺️😁
💜🌹💜
xo
B
I must love that fiery tango dance...
Your description is spot on on
Ty for reading, I'm always in awe that you're able to find something you like in my little offerings
I'm grateful for the RL add 🙏
I can feel that good Zen Australian vibe!
😉☺️😁
💜🌹💜
xo
B
Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 6:42am
Re: Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 6:46am
Thank you, Tim
I'm happy you enjoyed it and I'm appreciative of the RL add and your comments as well ☺
Please drop by and visit anytime!
🌹💜🌹
xo
-B
I'm happy you enjoyed it and I'm appreciative of the RL add and your comments as well ☺
Please drop by and visit anytime!
🌹💜🌹
xo
-B
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18th Oct 2020 7:44pm
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Re: Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 7:46pm
Awww Thank you, Rew
I'm humbled by your lovely comments.
Stop by and read anytime!
💜🌹💜
🌈
xo
-B
I'm humbled by your lovely comments.
Stop by and read anytime!
💜🌹💜
🌈
xo
-B
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
18th Oct 2020 7:51pm
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Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 8:06pm
The musical flow of it's refrain would lend well to an audio. Beautifully intimate voice, nicely paced meter. Lovely work.
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Re: Re. knowing.
Thank you for the compliment
and your comments
Much appreciated
🙏 🌹 💜 💜
xoxo
B
Re: Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 8:16pm
I'm sorry that happened. Please don't be discouraged. I hate the sound of my own voice but look how often I raise it for my art. lol
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Re: Re. knowing.
19th Oct 2020 10:04pm
You're crazy, you sound perfectly acceptable.
(I was going to say yummy but thought that was inappropriate... lol)
😁😁😁
haha
xo
B
(I was going to say yummy but thought that was inappropriate... lol)
😁😁😁
haha
xo
B
Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 11:45pm
Absolutely love this poem!! .. But you know this... these words have been repeating over and over in my head since first read... I know these three words will be disclosing some wisdoms as I continue to ponder the powers of such a simple little phrase... fantastic Blue..!
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Re: Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 11:55pm
Ohh, wow.
Thank you, Eli.
I'm all smiles here, that you're now saddled with the 'you know this' earworm... lol.
I'm so very glad you enjoyed it.
Your kind words and RL add improved a sour mood, exponentially.
I'm grateful for your visits.
💜🌹💜
xo
B
Thank you, Eli.
I'm all smiles here, that you're now saddled with the 'you know this' earworm... lol.
I'm so very glad you enjoyed it.
Your kind words and RL add improved a sour mood, exponentially.
I'm grateful for your visits.
💜🌹💜
xo
B
Re. knowing.
18th Oct 2020 11:58pm
Re. knowing.
11th Oct 2021 3:43am
Damn to the nth power. I'll stop there in my commentary , RL this and com back for more at a later date. Much respect.
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Re: Re. knowing.
Awww... Wow! ... What a flashback,revisit.... for sure! Thanks so much for checking out my older poems. I appreciate you taking the time to peek in and very much welcome and look forward to your return.... So glad you enjoyed - 🙏🏻
(I appreciate the generous list add, too!)
Nice to meet you :)
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B
(I appreciate the generous list add, too!)
Nice to meet you :)
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B