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The Small Things
Inspring colors
cascade across
a rusty barbecue.
Simple mood
changing magic.
cascade across
a rusty barbecue.
Simple mood
changing magic.
Published 15th Oct 2020
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15th Oct 2020 6:01pm
There is beauty in the simplest things; especially those reflecting the world a bit differently.
Lovely paying attention; both poem and imagery.
Lovely paying attention; both poem and imagery.
15th Oct 2020 6:22pm
15th Oct 2020 6:31pm
very very lovely little write.
Lovely colors in picture.
(Hows come y'ain't readin my stuff anymore? I do it all for You, love).
Lovely colors in picture.
(Hows come y'ain't readin my stuff anymore? I do it all for You, love).
15th Oct 2020 6:48pm
15th Oct 2020 8:11pm
Colors and their locations are sometimes ignored. Those who ignore miss out on an enhanced existence! Wonderful write Niki...🌹🌹👏
15th Oct 2020 10:46pm
17th Oct 2020 3:36am
Dear N,
To me it is definitely the small things that have the largest impact. Like the rainbow of colors on a rusty bbq grill there is so much beauty as to distract my thoughts and create some far away story. Lovely write. H🌷
To me it is definitely the small things that have the largest impact. Like the rainbow of colors on a rusty bbq grill there is so much beauty as to distract my thoughts and create some far away story. Lovely write. H🌷
21st Oct 2020 3:51pm
23rd Oct 2020 7:44am
Love the array, the contrast between the fore and back grounds and then you penned it nicely.
Excellent stuff.
Excellent stuff.
