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The Innocent Full Moon
Way up high so fine
Shine bright and kind from the sky
Love fools sigh all night
Shine bright and kind from the sky
Love fools sigh all night
Author's Note
October 1st was our traditional Full Moon Festival. The moon was so fine and bright. Every family had a barbecue, ate moon cakes and pomelos, especially appreciated the moon.
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Re. The Innocent Full Moon
10th Oct 2020 4:48pm
Dear RJ,
I adore this write and your author’s note about the festival. The beauty of the moon holds such peace at night. Beautiful piece. H🌷
I adore this write and your author’s note about the festival. The beauty of the moon holds such peace at night. Beautiful piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. The Innocent Full Moon
10th Oct 2020 4:57pm
Dear H,
Thank you for the nice feedback and RL addition.
You are such a nice person.
Jasmine
Thank you for the nice feedback and RL addition.
You are such a nice person.
Jasmine
Re. The Innocent Full Moon
10th Oct 2020 5:08pm
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11th Oct 2020 1:29pm
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10th Oct 2020 5:09pm
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Re. The Innocent Full Moon
10th Oct 2020 7:12pm
Glad you were so inspired by the moon!! You and this poem are lovely!
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11th Oct 2020 1:30pm
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Re: Re. The Innocent Full Moon
13th Oct 2020 1:42am
Dear Daniel, I did enjoy the holiday very much. It's like our second Chinese New Year. We cherish the chance that every family member travelled back home and caused terrible traffic jams on the freeways. Thank you for the nice feedback.
Jasmine
Jasmine