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Water Main Break
Sitting
Waiting for the repair
Will probably be hours
It’s quiet
No dishes to wash
No toilets to flush
Shower not
It’s a little poem
Life stalled
We take running water for granted
I think about it sometimes
Wondering if its color is clear or other
There’s a steeliness to its essence
Beautiful clarity
Waiting for the repair
Will probably be hours
It’s quiet
No dishes to wash
No toilets to flush
Shower not
It’s a little poem
Life stalled
We take running water for granted
I think about it sometimes
Wondering if its color is clear or other
There’s a steeliness to its essence
Beautiful clarity
Author's Note
Hurry up and wait
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Re. Water Main Break
5th Oct 2020 5:33pm
I'm always curious about little moments that make us sit back and go "how did we survive without this?!" when the water isn't working. or the electric goes out. or heaven forbid, the wifi goes down.
i like these little observational writes of yours. always have.
i like these little observational writes of yours. always have.
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Re: Re. Water Main Break
5th Oct 2020 6:26pm
Life presents situations and I take them as poem opportunities
I have nowhere important to go so I’ll okay the waiting game
No choice
Thx always Daisy
I have nowhere important to go so I’ll okay the waiting game
No choice
Thx always Daisy
Re. Water Main Break
5th Oct 2020 9:46pm
I hope the wait isn't too long. It's the one thing that irks me when we have a power outage here - since we are rural & on a well, no power means no water. When a big storm is coming, we fill the bathtubs for toilet-flushing water. It all sounds very quaint until it stretches on for days....
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Re: Re. Water Main Break
5th Oct 2020 10:29pm
Sounds lovely
This may push me back into an alcoholic haze if it goes on too long ..
This may push me back into an alcoholic haze if it goes on too long ..
Re. Water Main Break
5th Oct 2020 10:18pm
It's very true, we take many things for granted. But that also gives us time to pause and observe and you've captured this here very nicely.
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Re: Re. Water Main Break
5th Oct 2020 10:30pm
Re. Water Main Break
5th Oct 2020 10:47pm
It pains when, on a clear Summer day, you see these people wasting tons and tons of gallons of water washing their cars in the driveway, hours. Then ''washing'' the driveway. Then spraying the grass - hot sun, the worst time to do it. But hey: do not dare to tell them a word, they'll just say, ''I pay my taxes so fuck you...........''
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Re: Re. Water Main Break
5th Oct 2020 10:57pm
Then douse you with the hose
Here in America you get shot for those kinds of comments
Here in America you get shot for those kinds of comments
Re: Re. Water Main Break
In Canada as well. Ok: certainly not shot. No 2A craziness around here. Otherwise, same bunch of moronic idiots everywhere.
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Re. Water Main Break
6th Oct 2020 2:24am
Patience is a virtue? MY FURRY ASS! I want what I want and I want it RIGHT FUCKING NOW!@!!.
Great write PoetSpeak
hugs.
buddhakitty.
Great write PoetSpeak
hugs.
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Water Main Break
6th Oct 2020 3:23am
Re. Water Main Break
7th Oct 2020 1:07am
How do you so smoothly take the mundane and unnoticed; connect it to life's realities and make the world so aware of what is often taken for granted?
Masterful
I know I don't think twice about running water
And now I'm looking at other things I may wrongly take for granted
Thanks for the eye opener
Masterful
I know I don't think twice about running water
And now I'm looking at other things I may wrongly take for granted
Thanks for the eye opener
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Re: Re. Water Main Break
7th Oct 2020 1:11am
When stuff is suddenly missing, it's time to document the loss.
Water came back in 12 hours
It wasn't pretty in the bathroom my friend ....
Too much information, right ??
Thx FB
Water came back in 12 hours
It wasn't pretty in the bathroom my friend ....
Too much information, right ??
Thx FB