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Half-full
I cannot be up
When I am down
Glass half-full
Not the other way
Around.
''Best look up'' you say?
I could be rich
And healthy too
But in my tiny space
Such utopia
Is not to be found.
When I am down
Glass half-full
Not the other way
Around.
''Best look up'' you say?
I could be rich
And healthy too
But in my tiny space
Such utopia
Is not to be found.
Published 22nd Sep 2020
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23rd Sep 2020 00:45am
Much appreciated. Regards, Robert. (PS: I suppose in my style of poetry: no word wasted.)
23rd Sep 2020 2:54am
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3rd Oct 2020 00:38am
At times I've felt down I often think of those who've had it worse and triumphed, then I don't feel as low, it's just a slow climb.
Good write.
Good write.
3rd Oct 2020 00:41am
